 Megfly 2009-12-30 . chapter 15YAY! UPDATE! *does a dance*
I SO loved this chapter. It was such a nice balance of humour mixed with seriousness, and character development and all that fun stuff. Anybodys is SUCH a realistic mom-to-be, I mean, she's not your typical mom-to-be perhaps, but her thought processes and reactions and realisations are so perfectly adjusted to her character, it's just really well done. And I love any time that A-Rab gets to show his softer side. BECAUSE WE ALL KNOW HE IS SO LOOKING FORWARD TO BEING A DADDY, OMG. It's adorable and I love it.
But like I said you balance all that with just enough humour to keep everything from getting all wangsty. I LOVES IT!
Anyhoo, yay again for updates! YAYAY! |
 viennacantabile 2009-12-30 . chapter 15Heh, so I am still not to be discouraged from getting plastered on New Year's Eve, but HOLY MOLY did I love this chapter. Ahahahaha hungover!A-Rab is hilarious, and I really loved the underlying seriousness and Anybodys's realization that, whether they're ready or not, everything is going to change in about six months. Her worries about repeating their parents' mistakes are really well done, and like I said, them adjusting to the fact that, WHOA, they're going to be parents is so good. And also: THE ENDING. AHAHAHHA ANYBODYS, YOU ARE MADE OF AWESOME. XD
In short: thank you veryvery much for putting this chapter up before I go, because I HEART IT MUCHLY. Yay! XD |
 Megfly 2009-12-26 . chapter 14HOLY CRAP, THIS IS MY FAVOURITE CHAPTER YET, OMG. (even though it took me forever to review. Mea culpa -_-;)BUT YES, I LOVED THIS MUCHLY, MUCHLY!
Poor A-rab dealing with his moody Anybodys. XD. I can only imagine what she'd be like pregnant - except that I don't have to imagine, 'cause you write it so well, I pretty much assume she's like this, hah.
Randomly however, do you know what my favourite part of this was? CLARICE SQUIRT-GUNNING ELVIS. OMG. I laughed SO HARD at that, I almost peed. SERIOUSLY. WHICH I AM SURE WAS YOUR ULTIMATE GOAL. But honest to God, that cracked me up SO MUCH. it was such a random thing to happen, and yet PERFECT, ZOMG.
ALSO, MOUTHPIECE, OMG I LOVE HIM. He's such a big stupid puppy. XD And Midge's two second cameo being all "Um. Dear, please stop molesting Big Deal!Santa. KTHXBAI."
Anyway, I love, love LOVED THIS, SO MUCH OMG. This fic is AWESOME, LIKE WHOA. Hope you had a very Merry Christmas and got spoiled in the manner you deserve! HEART! |
 viennacantabile 2009-12-23 . chapter 14BWAHAHA AWW. Oh, Jet Christmases. Let's see...I love the annual Christmas party, A-Rab getting annoyed at copycat spikers, OHEMGEE ELVIS AND IZZY, GAHH BIG DEAL!SANTA, and bwahaha oh, Mouthpiece. He so would do that! XD THAT PART IS ADORABLE, GAHH. And now I have begun to think that Ice and Velma are the official chroniclers of the chaos that is the Jets. BWAHAHA. Anyway, this chapter is freaking adorable, and I heart it. Merry Christmas Eve, my dear! :) |
 Megfly 2009-12-16 . chapter 13Bah, it just took me nine tries to review without getting an error message. Anyhoo.
YAY UPDATE!
A-Rab and Anybodys are the cutest EVER. Seriously, I loved them so much in this chapter, it's not eevn funny. I love how A-Rab is such a total softy. HE'S GONNA BE SUCH A GOOD DADDY. And bahahahah, I likewise love how they have pretty much no shame about making out wherever the heck they happen to be.
AND OMG WILL KELLY, HOW FREAKING CUTE ARE YOU?!?! He said hello to Anybodys' tummy. XD GAH, ADORABLE.
AND A-RAB GOT HIS PICTURE WITH SANTA (it wasn't Mouthpiece doing his mall Santa gig, right? Because poor A-Rab would probably be scarred for life, lol). Seriously, I loved this so, so, so much. You write all of these characters SO FANTASTICALLY. I bow to your skillz dearest :) AWESOME JOB. |
 viennacantabile 2009-12-15 . chapter 13BWAHAHA I LOVED THIS CHAPTER SO VERY, VERY MUCH. XD I loved this:
Anybodys was never sure how best to respond to A-Rab when he got like this—she usually settled for a sarcastic remark. But there again, how often was it that he said something like this? “Um,” she said very intelligently.
And everything afterward, including the NAUGHTY TERRIBLE TWOSOME BEING VERY BAD IN A TOY STORE, HAHAHA. And GAHH, HI WILL! HI AVA! Bwahaha oh, Will, I may love you forever for making A-Rab join Action in the ranks of the Jets Who Have Sat on Santa's Lap. TEEHEE. Not that I didn't love you forever anyway. XD But ohemgee, really, this may be one of my favorite chapters EVER, and not just because you plugged my fic at the top, hahaha (thanks, whore XD). This is seriously adorable, and so ridiculously in-character, and GAHH CHRISTMAS. Fantastic job, twinnie!! XD |
 LoveforEliot 2009-12-12 . chapter 12Ah, the amazing miracle that is life! - that is what you've put against this grungy backdrop of New York, and it's brilliant! |
 SheWhoDreamsByDarkness-x 2009-12-12 . chapter 12Aw that was just too darn cute for words! =)
Sure, I'll be glad to give you any info for the birth... just yell for it whenever you want it =)
Seriously, I love this story. How Sissy was all protective over Anybodys, questioning A-Rab's attentiveness, and how he calls Snowboy in the night... he SO would, we all know it! =P
Keep up the brilliant work, LC!
Can't wait to see more! =) |
 Megfly 2009-12-11 . chapter 12AW. *flails* ANYBODYS YOU ACT ALL TOUGH BUT I'VE GOT YOUR NUMBER YOU BIG SOFTY. GAH!
Have I mentioned lately how much I love, love, love how you write Anybodys? BECAUSE I LOVE IT IMMENSELY. Honestly, you get her character SO WELL, which her perfect mix of toughness and tenderness. THE END OF THIS CHAPTER WAS PERFECTION. Seriously.
Oh and you included that stuff about the pre-kicking baby movement that's SO FREAKING HARD TO DESCRIBE, as I believe we ranted at each other about a while ago, lol. But the way you put it in here was so perfect. AND I LOVE SISSY. And I love ehr being so excited and I love her interaction with Anybodys and A-Rab.
Anyhoo, loved this as usual! YOU ARE AWESOME :D Write more soon, kay? |
 viennacantabile 2009-12-11 . chapter 12GACK, THIS CHAPTER WAS SO SWEET. Oh, Sissy! Poor big sister, walking in on Anybodys and A-Rab--yeah. But yeah, I really love Anybodys's growing realization that, yes, Virginia, there IS a baby, and what all of that entails. Sniff. And heh, the A-Rab moments were fun, as always, but really, this chapter totally belonged to Sissy and Anybodys and Baby Rabinowitz. Sniff.
..although you just know that when Pipsqueak misbehaves in the future, Anybodys is just going to be like, "NO WONDER YOU FELT LIKE GAS, YOU BAD CHILD." XD Anyway, thankyouthankyouthankyou for the End of Hell Week Present, I love it muchly! XD |
 SheWhoDreamsByDarkness-x 2009-12-10 . chapter 10Ohmy God.
Gigglesnort.
"What's everyone thankful for this year?"
I love Minnie.
And I lvoe you LC! You and your glorious work! *hugs*
Fantastic as always! |
 SheWhoDreamsByDarkness-x 2009-12-10 . chapter 11BWA HA HA.
Oh Action. Silly silly Action. You should know better.
I loved it, LC!
Simply marvellous!
Btw, while I remember, if you get stuch on developmental process of babies etc etc, I can help you out there - I have a book so I could swot up on it for my midwifery interviews so... yeah =)
But looks like you;re doing fine on your own!
Can't wait for the enxt chapter! |
 xXc0okieSsNcrEamXx 2009-12-07 . chapter 11Hehehe, oh, LC, the brilliance never ceases! Pissy, pregnant Anybodys is ridiculously amusing! You write her SO WELL, it's not even funny! The random bursting into tears and then subsequently threatening Big Deal was just so Anybodys in every way. I also love the "mysterious" Indian burns on Action's arm, lol. And I swear the the thought of Mouthpiece in the ER really did make me giggle!
This was another fabulous chapter! I can't wait to see what else you have cooked up for the next six and a half months! XD |
 fir8008 2009-12-07 . chapter 11OMG, I love Anybodys... just threatening everyone and puking in front of people. XD |
 Megfly 2009-12-05 . chapter 11OMG I LAUGHED SO HARD AT THIS CHAPTER. Seriously, this whole thing was so funny, from Action getting beat on by a girl, to Mouthpiece making Anybodys lunch, to Anybodys puking in the trash bin. SERIOUSLY, I LOLED, OH HOW I LOLED.
I love how pissy Anybodys is and how everyone is afraid of her. THAT'S RIGHT BOYS, FEAR THE HORMONAL PREGNANT LADY. Oh and her bursting into tears for no apparent reason, hah. RUN AWAY BIG DEAL, RUN AWAY. Aw and A-Rab is so sweet, being all worried about his girl :)
Anyway, GAH THIS WAS SO AWESOME. Seriously, I read it twice just because it amused me so much. XD. I LOVES IT. AND APPARENTLY YOUR LOVE OF CAPS IS CATCHING! Plz to be updating soon? |
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