This story made me laugh! MouthPiece and butterflys! This was the best story I have ever read!

Hmm... are the names of the boy scouts borrowed from the actors? Because as soon as I saw the name Russell, I though of Russ(ell) Tamblyn...

*coughsneezechockespasm* K-Kevin? Doug? R...Russel? SOMEONE HAS BEEN WATCHING UP ALMOST AS MUCH AS I HAVE!

Lmao Mouthpiece, you rock hard. And the boy scouts are the best :D

Tony joined in with Riff's laughter. "Not 'less we rumble against the Girl Scouts!"

Ah Tony. I love that Tony is an actual part of the gang in this. Not just Some Guy. And Ice. I could see Ice doin a FACEPALM.

And-And the mugger! Just...lol, having his face sat upon the whole time.

And Velma being hit on by pre-teens!

Wait, was Kevin the one with code-name Carrot Top? Lol.

Tee-Hee. Liked the ending with A-Rab and Mouthpiece and Russell and YES, I COULD EASILY SEE ICE CRACKIN (tee-hee, ice. cracking.)AND COMPLETELY GOING ALL GIGGLY AND EYE-TWITCHY AND...That was made of win through and through.

This story came out great. I am one HAPPY CAMPER.

...I half-expected him to walk in on them. LMAO, that was great. I loved it. My only thing is that I'm insanely picky about capital letter. The chapter titles and story title didn't have the right capitals. It was a great story, so I hate being picky, but ASDFGHKL;KJDHFGASDAJDKALAH! I'm probablly OCD. Sorry. Ice was perfect and so was Riff and Velma and, frankly, Baby John. But Ice, mostly, I was very impressed by. Also, more OCD: do they say "ya" because that's how they talk, sort of like Hagrid's dialouge in HP isn't in perfect language, or do you just put it there? Because I've noticed it in quite a few West Side Story fics so I thik its because they *do* sound like that. But I've read ones where the author was too lazy/retarded/Vally Girl to write "you". Drives me insane. Again, I'm very nit-picky when its a good fic. And it was. Really good. Off to read the next chapter, and I hope that was a good chunky bit of review. I love getting long ones too.

TurtleMoose

I loved that! It was funny, and it hinted at a few things. And Kevin, Doug, and Russell were from Up! I loved that movie!

OHEMGEE that was high-larious!

I giggled all the way through!

Let me guess... kevin, LC's bro? No wait, that was a Fred... hm... Can't guess. P

This was brilliant Vee. my favourite part? DEINITLEY the end!

Velma couldn’t quite contain her glee at the sight of her shirtless boyfriend. “Me neither,” she breathed as she pulled him down for a kiss. “Now c’mere, you.”

And then:

“HI, VELMA!”

Velma almost screamed with frustration. First Baby John, then Russell, and now—Mouthpiece? On top of her, Ice swore.

“I FOUND YA THE BUTTERFLY!” Mouthpiece bellowed happily from outside her window.

“There wasn’t even a butterfly!” hissed Velma, gritting her teeth as she imagined punching the Jet in the face.

Ice laughed. Velma glanced at him. Had he finally cracked?

In response to her look, Ice chuckled again and threw his hands up in the air. “I give up. Ignore him,” he advised, leaning down and kissing her throat. “I am.”

Velma sucked in her breath. Maybe there was something to that theory, after all. And it wasn’t as if their other methods had worked… “Help me out with that?”

And Ice grinned. “Don’t mind if I do.”

EPICNESS.

Congrats and kudos, you finished a great story! xD

GAHH, YAY FOR COMPLETED MULTI-CHAPTER WOKRS! I THOUGHT YOU WERE NEVER GOING TO UPDATE THIS STORY! XD

So how is it, Vee, that your stories can make me go from crying to side-splitting laughter? I'm not quite sure, but they certainly do! I can't even remember the last time I've consecutively laughed so hard and for so long! Pre-teen Boy Scouts hitting on Velma, dumb muggers, Mouthpiece chasing butterflies, Ice practically killing Tony and Riff, Velma and Ice never having any privacy...I JUST LOVE YOU! And POOR A-RAB! He doesn't know what he's in for! ;)

This was a marvelous story, Vee! I heart it! :)

Oh, and if this is what you mean by identify: Russell is the short, dark-haired leader Boy Scout; Kevin is the tall redhead; and Doug is the blonde one with freckles. Right? XD

Poor Ice! He just can't catch a break when you're the author, can he? :D

I LOVE the way baby John's portrayed in this story-so innocent, so very, very naive, but also kind-hearted... to the extreme!

UP, UP, UP YOU REFERENCED UP! I LOVE YOU!

Sorry, I got really excited there.

Um. Anyhow, so this made me laugh outloud more times than I can count. I mean really, between the mugger, the Up!Boyscouts, Mouthpiece,stolen walkies from Krupke and Goddarad,Doug!Scout being good at tracking, Riff and Tony taking a beating, and Ice making sounds like a distressed moose, I may have actually ruptured something.

Also, you made Mouthpiece *bleat*. That may actually be the best Mouthpiece-associated verb I have ever laid eyes on. HE BLEATED, OMG.

Seriously Vee, this was hysterical, and a fitting end to the awesomeness of Stealth!Baby John. I LOVES IT.

And lastly, I leave you with this thought: "I hid under your porch because I love you!"

BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA OHEMGEE BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA OHEMGEE I CACKLED. I SWEAR TO GOD, I CACKLED. I WAS LAUGHING PERIODICALLY, EVEN THOUGH I'VE SEEN SOME OF THIS BEFORE. GAH.

Seriously? YOU ARE A GENIUS. THIS WAS TOO. FUNNY. It was even better than chapter one! I CERTAINLY WAITED LONG ENOUGH FOR IT. BUT OHEMGEE, GAH!

I can't even pick out my favorite parts because I don't think the review box will hold that much. BUT BAHAHAHAHAHA RUSSEL, KEVIN AND DOUG. I LOLED. SRSLY. AND BASKET-WEAVING, OHEMGEE. BEST MERIT BADGE EVER.

AND BAHAHAHAHA TO RIFF AND TONY. OHEMGEE. JUST...OHEMGEE. That is so THEM! That is just the way they were! GAH!

And now I am intensely curious what A-Rab's master plan is. METHINKS A SEQUEL IS IN ORDER. Good thing A-Rab isn't dating Anybodys yet, or else she might have to murder Baby John XD

In simple English, I FUCKING LOVED THIS CHAPTER, GAH. GAH. GAH. THIS IS SERIOUSLY ONE OF THE FUNNIEST THINGS I'VE EVER READ! LOVE YOU!

Hehehe, this was hysterical! Picturing Baby John popping out of nowhere made me laugh more than you could ever imagine! Update soon; I can't wait to see what happens! :)

This story is freaking hilarious, seriously. I just giggled my way through that entire chapter. Stealth!Baby John popping out of...pretty much everywhere is one of the funniest mental images I've had for a while. And poor Ice, just trying to get in on with his woman IN PEACE, lol. BRILLIANCE. I can't wait to see where this is going. GAH, LOVE IT, GAH.

BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA I HEART THIS SO VERY, VERY MUCH! This is like, even better than the snippets! BECAUSE IT'S IN FANFICTION FORM! GAH HEART! AND OHEMGEE LOVE A-RAB AND HIS DREAM, GAH! UPDATE!