 Valmarien 2009-12-21 . chapter 1Very nice - I have missed those two ^_^ |
 Michelle Montague 2009-10-21 . chapter 1 I quite enjoyed this story, and I can't wait for the update/sequel on Our Little Secret. Please post soon! |
 midorimouse7 2009-10-04 . chapter 1It's a sweet one-shot. It gives you a little insider on how Rose and Scorpius' relationship has changed them (for the better). Also its nice to know that they are not the center of gossip anymore. |
 Dhara 2009-09-24 . chapter 1 I love your take on scorpius and rose and i am so glad that u have not forsaken them! Our little secret is my fav story of the 2 of them. U write them in a way that seems real. Scorpius is still very very slithern and a malfoy but he is so sweet and worthy of rose. he is still proud but not a jerk, cunning but not malicous, sexy but not a sex god.Rose is a delight as well, a very good mix of both her parents and not just hermione. I love that i see a bit of ron in her, since ron was always one of my fav's. I also love the way u portrayed ron in the stories, he is still the same ron we love, but he has matured, and even though he is over protective it isn't overbaring,or annoying which is how alot of fanfic authors portray him. i like the way that i you kept him real,and integral to the way jk portrayed him. I especially love his and hermione's relationship they are still the same way that they were before but grown up, and they still have not forgotten the romance. Long story short I am a big fan of the our little secret world! |
 MollyCoddles 2009-09-23 . chapter 1Summoning charms must not work when the lost item is in the Restricted Section. Probably a wise precaution, in a school of magic, heheh.
Nice that Rose was rewarded for finding her lost journal! I wonder if she might be tempted to "accidentally" misplace other items.
Sweet one-shot! Off to find my hidden stash of raspberry Bliss... |
 alix33 2009-09-22 . chapter 1This type of journal - does it increase its number of pages magically to last as long as whomever writes in it, or in this case Rose, wants it to?
"What if a classmate found the journal and sold it to the Intruder? Some of the entry titles read like Cosmo Teen Witch articles. She would never live down a headline like Ten Kisses That Make Me Melt!" - So she is a good writer? Good enough to go to magical journalism school after acing her NEWTs? (Where Rita Skeeter, IMO, flunked out after nary a semester.)
"Bertha the Behemoth." - That statue's name gave me a mental pic eerily similar to Milicent Bulstrode in appearance...
"He ran a finger along the words she’d added in silver leaf" - How did she do that? Complex muggle calligraphy-like activities similar to those that resulted in the existence of the Book of Kells, or a mere simple OWL-level charm?
“I could tell you, but then I’d have to snog you.” - LOL
"and tell me you enjoyed this story in a review! :)" - Oh yeah! Thanks a bunch! |
 Missdagane 2009-09-21 . chapter 1That was great. I forget to write it in the review, but one fact that I really apreciate is that Scorpius, even if he's with Rose, can get still angry with her. I don't know, that gives a realistic touch at your fics.A nyway, I'm impatient fot the next parts ;-) |
 TillTheLastRoseDies 2009-09-20 . chapter 1sequel=smiles.
yay.
this was cute.
(: |
 drcjsnider 2009-09-20 . chapter 1Actually, I wouldn't mind reading 10 Kisses that Made Me Melt!
Hehe... lovely little one-shot. I adore how Rose kidded herself about the journal and Scorpius being being a bit disappointed that Rose didn't confide in him. I could see why she would be embarrassed, mind. Can't wait to get a glimpse at what Scorpius has been writing. :) |
 Kylani 2009-09-19 . chapter 1Ah! This missing moment is beyond perfect and adorable! I love it! I'd say more, compliments and critique (though I can't think of any critique right now), but I'm kind of in a fuzzy tired state and shall instead merely bow before your talent. |
 Creamy_Heart 2009-09-19 . chapter 1 I *cannot* wait for the sequel to "Our Little Secret". That story is, without contest, my absolute favorite Scorpius/Rose fanfic.
As for the one shot, I love how Scorpius writes about Rose too! I never would've thought, since Rose is the "listmaker" in the relationship, the one who takes notes in class and whatnot; it was really really nice to find out this little tidbit about Scorpius. Definitely makes him even more yummy and their relationship that much sweeter.
Please, more soon!! :) |
 WishingHeart 2009-09-19 . chapter 1Yay! I was so happy when I saw this story. :D Love your Scorpius and Rose. Haha, I would've loved to see Lucius's face if Scorpius had in fact wrote to him about his certain ... emotions. :P Anyways, wonderful job and I can't wait for more! |
 Itsa Mia 2009-09-19 . chapter 1This is the review to tell you that I enjoyed this story ._. :D Pshyeah I enjoyed it! I feel all fluffy inside 8D xD You've just made me excited to read more on your elaboration on these two. I like it because there's a lot more room for you to make them you own but you're still keeping true to the impressions we could get from the real work. I like that :) I like you :D Keep writing and I'll keep on liking you more 8D |
 sunny9847 2009-09-19 . chapter 1Pefect description of first love.
Thanks for another great story.
Sunny |
 Lady Livia 2009-09-19 . chapter 1"Ten Kisses That Make Me Melt!"
Oh Oh!
I'd love to read that!
This was cute. I'd missed them.
*huggs* |