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ayame0012
2009-10-17 . chapter 1
I love this story! are you going to write the second chapter soon? i hope you do.
amnerine
2009-10-16 . chapter 1
A bit choppy but quite cute ^^
Kakashi ill just...icky XD Now I feel the terrible urge to blow my nose and drink a glass of orange juice. Just reading how sick he was made me feel like taking precautions!

Aria
Julie
2009-10-11 . chapter 1
Oh I really really loved this ^_^

and the transitions from one time of him waking up to the next were just perfect, I loved every scene.

Lol when Kakashi was trying to talk to Tsunade and everything came out sounding like gibberish, I was cracking up like no other.
Julie
2009-10-11 . chapter 1
Oh I really really loved this ^_^

and the transitions from one time of him waking up to the next were just perfect, I loved every scene.

Lol when Kakashi was trying to talk to Tsunade and everything came out sounding like gibberish, I was cracking up like no other.
Julie
2009-10-11 . chapter 1
Oh I really really loved this ^_^

and the transitions from one time of him waking up to the next were just perfect, I loved every scene.

Lol when Kakashi was trying to talk to Tsunade and everything came out sounding like gibberish, I was cracking up like no other.
RedEmber018
2009-10-04 . chapter 1
loved it!
keemirain
2009-09-26 . chapter 1
HMM. Tell you my favorite lines?
Too much of everything!

I think the one that got me cracking up like a banshee is "“No,” Kakashi said, truthfully, “I may die in my sleep.”

“Then stay dead,” At the look on his face, Sakura rolled her eyes and leaned forward to brush her palm against his forehead."

God that was a good laugh! XD
I like when I couldn't make out what Kakashi was saying too.
That sexy man and his romantic sides.
Who knew!
and I was 'feelin' Naruto and Sasuke's good intentions alright (:
I usually will post a long comment but after HOURS of reading the challenges, one tends to be drowsy, you understand.
DAMN, I'm going to have a hard time voting.
But I'm so glad every story I stumbled on was funny
And your story was certainly worth staying up for ((:
Thanks for writing!
Amrun
2009-09-22 . chapter 1
Well, that was pretty hilarious. While Kakashi's incomprehensibility while sick was very funny, it was literally incomprehensible. I don't know what he was trying to say, for the most part, and I'm not sure if that was your intention.

I'm also a little confused by Sakura's role in this story. Their relationships seems to be new, and yet this also seems to be somewhat of a routine. Are they already in a relationship or has he somehow made a confession this chapter that I've missed, possibly to do with knowing her birthday?

Anyway, thanks for sharing. It was cute.
Songlian
2009-09-21 . chapter 1
I'm certainly glad for your laziness since I really had a lot of fun reading this. I figured it'd just be some cute fluffy stuff and some funny lines here and there since I haven't read anything else you've written so far, but I was blown away.. really!

You have a great sense of humor and I laughed quite a bit while reading this. I really enjoy the way you write Kakashi and Sakura together. You've made them into quite the little comedic duo. I don't think the fic came off awkward at all. I think it flowed rather nicely and didn't skip a beat. I hope you decide to write more stories like this with them in the future, but whatever you do, thanks for sharing!
darksoulwolf
2009-09-20 . chapter 1
that was too cute
GitaMerah
2009-09-20 . chapter 1
That was hilarious! I love the Tsunade's conversation with Kakashi.
Mewsthecat
2009-09-19 . chapter 1
i love that it's so sweet! it's not akward at all
Eldr-Fire
2009-09-19 . chapter 1
I love stories where one of them is sick. xD Not in a sadistic way, but just aww! I dunno if this was on purpose, but I noticed the ambiguity of their actual relationship. I liked this story a lot!

Eldr
Kuarahy
2009-09-19 . chapter 1
Oh! this was hilarious!. I loved the way you wrote the interaction between them, it was refreshing. You can even write one more chapter, the idea is so good and entertaining that gives the opening for more. I loved it. (:
Ryuui Hatake
2009-09-19 . chapter 1
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA - GASP! - HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
XD ok,this made me laugh like,eleventeen times? XD lols. yeah,i loved the part where Sakura was like "And stroke my hair!" and Kakashi did it. XD this is really nice. GOOD WORK!^^
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