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Reviews for: Lemon Cinnamon Raspberry Dream
Sonar
2009-10-16 . chapter 1
heh heh. I liked it.
speadee
2009-09-20 . chapter 1
Good story and surprise! It's hard to be that the Seigaku regulars don't know about the ice cream shop while the rival schools do. If the shop was right in front of them, wouldn't they have seen it right away before Inui even said anything? If they were having practice, they would be at school, and not in front of an ice cream shop.
Khelc-sul Renai
2009-09-19 . chapter 1
...You really are my favorite Prince of Tennis author, did you know that?

Love the test made by Inui and his location for telling everyone the test. Utterly hilarious. I like who helped the different team members... Mizuki showing up is crazy...

"You know what, Tachibana's little sister?" he asked. "You just became my new favourite person." That made me laugh aloud. But "When Taka-san and I arrived… why was Tezuka feeding you ice cream?" was by far my favorite line.

Well written. Fun read!
BleuFleur
2009-09-19 . chapter 1
Very funny story with a fantastic zinger at the end. Thanks for sharing!
UpperClassK9
2009-09-19 . chapter 1
AHAHAHAHAHA! ZOMG, I lurve the ending! (is in bouncy fangirl mode) It's really quite ironic, yes? I suppose Inui could have hinted a bit more that they were supposed to work together, but... Where's the fun in that? XD
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