OMG amazing. HTis story is GREAT. i cant wait for the next Chppie! LUV YA Kamara'P.S. YOu beter update soon its been more thatn ten freakng days!

that was awesome

i loved it

i need more

and that mental picture i'm having of edward and bella

is so CUTE i hope they get together SOON

alannah

love it great job, they are so cute together, hope they get together soon, update really soon hun.

oh love it, great start, can't wait for more, please please update really really soon. ;-D

*Squeals* You're writing another story I LOVE! Yah! Lol! Okay, anyway! This story is great, as you can obviously tell by my last statement! Lol! Hm...I'm hyper today. Lol! Sugar is good! : )

Loves you lots,

Kittykat! : )

I loved it!

OMGNESS loved it. Ok so my guess is the dude is alec. JUst kiding. I think it's um...hold on I know this one. But of course Jacob Black yo. He is hot stuff.

wow zoe, you dark horse! i didnt know you were such a good writer! lol are you still writing songs? hit me up on facebook, bebo or text haha xx

Oh, that 's too bad but if it is your choice, then i will respect you. You are starting new story again? oh i will want to read it. Just hope it won't end like this story.( no more updating!)

Sadly I agree the stroy has gone in a completely wrong turn. But don't give up just edit. Bit if you do just write a chapter saying they were all killed by a newk. Well good luck.

I don't really like the near end of chapter 4

Interesting Plot

Cant wait to read more

OMG, what 's happening wf bella? plz help her, it hurts to see her like this.

love it! )) update soon!

:). Please please continue! soon.:)