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stacht
2010-02-16 . chapter 1
I love this :D Do you think maybe you could write a sequel? I would love to read some James & Jim bonding :) I really liked the Kirk & Uhura interaction!
Hikari Urania
2010-02-02 . chapter 1
This is the kind of fic that has women like me just bursting with tears of happiness. It physically hurt to keep the "AW!" in. Loved the story!
miragelover33
2010-01-11 . chapter 1
Wowowowowowowowowow. That was such a wonderful story! Thank you so much; so heartfelt and touching.
SHGrey18
2009-12-20 . chapter 1
I love how you described the relationship between Kirk and Nyota . . .also love baby Jim :) Kudos!
Witchy-grrl
2009-11-30 . chapter 1
Oh, that was bloody FANTASTIC. :D The angst and humor were perfectly mixed in, and YAY FOR FLUFF AT THE END. :P Definitely adding to my favs!
NewspaperTaxis
2009-10-02 . chapter 1
AW! This is too sweet. I love Kirk's freak-out. And Bones' assessment that he sounded like a wailing little girl. But seriously, his freak-out made me totally giggle. But the ending was absolutely perfect. I liked the italics but the actual birth/present time was much stronger. This is totally sweet and Kirk's so perfect for the kid - You and I are going to be TIGHT! *giggles* I can totally see Kirk taking a night shift to let Uhura and Spock sleep and taking the little one to the bridge to play... He's totally going to be the "fun" uncle! But that freak-out was total WIN!
LunarEclispe
2009-09-28 . chapter 1
Awe!! This is one of the sweetest things I've ever read. The bonding between Jim and the baby at the end was so cute!! Good job!!
Jetsir
2009-09-27 . chapter 1
Such a lovely story. :) It was perfectly written and I loved how you started in the middle of the story and worked your way forwards and back as the story progressed. Good job.
Chimaera-Stormhawk
2009-09-21 . chapter 1
Nice!
Kirk sounds like The Blonde Vortex there at the end ;)
"We're going to be tight!"
Vashti
2009-09-20 . chapter 1
That was absolutely lovely. The flashbacks were well done and delightfully not-long (my eyes tend to glaze over when there's too much text in italics, even if its my own story), and Kirk himself was just absolutely perfect. I enjoyed seeing this all from his perspective. So glad this was recced on spock_uhura on livejournal.
Harm Marie
2009-09-20 . chapter 1
Aww...I loved this.
onimosity
2009-09-19 . chapter 1
This is so lovely. Love your character voices and the **timing** of the pregnancy. Very in character. Bravo.
Marshallana
2009-09-19 . chapter 1
This was an awesome story. I haven't read one like it, and I think you did a great job :)
juzwanna
2009-09-19 . chapter 1
you know what? I liked this story-loved the Uhura/Kirk interaction. Kirk despite his arrogance, is a loyal friend to Spock and Uhura. this funny and touching.
Toadflame
2009-09-19 . chapter 1
Jim freaking out over delivering a baby-priceless! And the flashbacks made the entire story come together!
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