|Reviews for I know what your did last summer|
| DaughterOfTheStarsandMist 7/12/10 . chapter 1
Oh...wait, I am not allowed to swear in reviews. So, your story: a rip-off of the REAL movie. When there's supposed to be exclamation, there is NONE. Not even a PERIOD! When arguing or not agreeing, the one not going with it often give in. If they did, they need some sort of action to make them. EXAMPLE: Julie didn't want to keep it secret. Barry choked her, making her accept it as a secret. *End of example from actual movie*. Esther, although the outdated name that makes me think of a grandmother, is ovibously your favorite! If you do continue, I expect you'll make her Emo, Goth or so pretty. The pretty means "Mary-Sue". Emo and Goth were favored amognst true goths and emos, but however with the large amount of them showing, it is turning into a "Mary-Sue". OK, now remember, I am not "dissing" you, I am helping with your writing. If I see a message in my inbox calling me a f***, b*** or retard, you will be reported! OK, THIS IS NOT PERSONAL.