 SongaiX 2009-11-27 . chapter 4Looking good! So now half of the team is in Unleashed and the other left Mario with his mustashe on fire Lol!! Poor Mario. Totally seperated from each other... This shpuld get interesting! Oh man where will they go next XD I love it! |
 truthordareftw 2009-11-19 . chapter 1You guys are AWESOME :D PLZ have my OC in this awesome fic! :D
Alec the Panther
description: a pale-white panther with crystal blue eyes and black Adam Gontier-style hair
Outfit 1: A sleeveless black trench coat with red chain straps, black leather pants with a red chain belt, black fingerless gloves with a red chain to tighten them
outfit 2: jeans and a black Oaklee hoodie With white and green Nike shoes |
 GlassSuicune 2009-11-01 . chapter 4Ah, that's my Miley! Setting Mario's mustache on fire IS something she would do. Hilarious chapter! Can't wait for the next one! |
 EmpireofShadow 2009-11-01 . chapter 4One word.
Histarically funny...wait.
Sora: "pushes me out of the way" Enough with your counting problems. Where are my nicknames?!
Me: "sweatdrop" I don't really think they're that impor..."hit with a giant wrench" |
 dark leader omega 2009-10-31 . chapter 4Don't call mario fat... he is but... that's mean.
Lateralus: listen to the kettle call the teacup black.
Shut up boy! and get back in your cell! don't make me bring out the hose! |
 EM98 2009-10-31 . chapter 4good job isander |
 bookaholic226 2009-10-14 . chapter 3Me: WHAT IS WITH YOU AND BRICKS, RINET?! The otter has a sword, Sayoran has alchemy, and you have BRICKS! What's so great about BRICKS!?
Rinet: Hey, don't go hatin' on the bricks! Their house was the only one that DIDN'T get blown over by the Big Bad Wolf!
Me:...So, uh... sorry bricks.
Rinet: The bricks say 'you're next'.
Me: *whimper* <:(
Unfortunately, virtual chocolate is never as satisfying as the real deal. Nevertheless, here is a virtual Hershey's. [HERSHEY'S] <--(that's it. yup, right there. virtualized candy bar at your service...) |
 chrisATD1 2009-10-14 . chapter 3Wow! Plotholes and chocolate. What will you guys think of next. lol |
 Emerald-with-a-Silver-Wind 2009-10-13 . chapter 3Awesome story so far!! =D Sorry to say... What about my OC? *Sniffle* Either way, I LOVE the story! ^_^ |
 GlassSuicune 2009-10-13 . chapter 3Awesome chapter, but where's Miley? Anyway, I think that mysterious dude who defeated Eggman Nega was Sayoran, but that's just a guess. Can't wait for the next update and happy Halloween! |
 EM98 2009-10-13 . chapter 3pleaSE USE MY OC |
 hijaku 2009-10-13 . chapter 3 I WANT TAT CHOCOLATE! |
 StarlightDragon1636 2009-10-13 . chapter 3nice job star, but you seem to have forgotten that the Sharks Fang is curved and razor edged, not an oversized knife. |
 Crystal the Cat 2009-10-13 . chapter 3lol funny!
WAIT! Is Star STILL in the robotizizor, or is she a robot now? |
 BlueAlpha54 2009-10-13 . chapter 2Okay, not all characters that appear in the first chapter are bad. Many that do appear in the first chapter however end up being Sues. |