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SongaiX
2009-11-27 . chapter 4
Looking good! So now half of the team is in Unleashed and the other left Mario with his mustashe on fire Lol!! Poor Mario. Totally seperated from each other... This shpuld get interesting! Oh man where will they go next XD I love it!
truthordareftw
2009-11-19 . chapter 1
You guys are AWESOME :D PLZ have my OC in this awesome fic! :D

Alec the Panther
description: a pale-white panther with crystal blue eyes and black Adam Gontier-style hair

Outfit 1: A sleeveless black trench coat with red chain straps, black leather pants with a red chain belt, black fingerless gloves with a red chain to tighten them

outfit 2: jeans and a black Oaklee hoodie With white and green Nike shoes
GlassSuicune
2009-11-01 . chapter 4
Ah, that's my Miley! Setting Mario's mustache on fire IS something she would do. Hilarious chapter! Can't wait for the next one!
EmpireofShadow
2009-11-01 . chapter 4
One word.
Histarically funny...wait.
Sora: "pushes me out of the way" Enough with your counting problems. Where are my nicknames?!
Me: "sweatdrop" I don't really think they're that impor..."hit with a giant wrench"
dark leader omega
2009-10-31 . chapter 4
Don't call mario fat... he is but... that's mean.

Lateralus: listen to the kettle call the teacup black.

Shut up boy! and get back in your cell! don't make me bring out the hose!
EM98
2009-10-31 . chapter 4
good job isander
bookaholic226
2009-10-14 . chapter 3
Me: WHAT IS WITH YOU AND BRICKS, RINET?! The otter has a sword, Sayoran has alchemy, and you have BRICKS! What's so great about BRICKS!?
Rinet: Hey, don't go hatin' on the bricks! Their house was the only one that DIDN'T get blown over by the Big Bad Wolf!
Me:...So, uh... sorry bricks.
Rinet: The bricks say 'you're next'.
Me: *whimper* <:(

Unfortunately, virtual chocolate is never as satisfying as the real deal. Nevertheless, here is a virtual Hershey's. [HERSHEY'S] <--(that's it. yup, right there. virtualized candy bar at your service...)
chrisATD1
2009-10-14 . chapter 3
Wow! Plotholes and chocolate. What will you guys think of next. lol
Emerald-with-a-Silver-Wind
2009-10-13 . chapter 3
Awesome story so far!! =D Sorry to say... What about my OC? *Sniffle* Either way, I LOVE the story! ^_^
GlassSuicune
2009-10-13 . chapter 3
Awesome chapter, but where's Miley? Anyway, I think that mysterious dude who defeated Eggman Nega was Sayoran, but that's just a guess. Can't wait for the next update and happy Halloween!
EM98
2009-10-13 . chapter 3
pleaSE USE MY OC
hijaku
2009-10-13 . chapter 3
I WANT TAT CHOCOLATE!
StarlightDragon1636
2009-10-13 . chapter 3
nice job star, but you seem to have forgotten that the Sharks Fang is curved and razor edged, not an oversized knife.
Crystal the Cat
2009-10-13 . chapter 3
lol funny!

WAIT! Is Star STILL in the robotizizor, or is she a robot now?
BlueAlpha54
2009-10-13 . chapter 2
Okay, not all characters that appear in the first chapter are bad. Many that do appear in the first chapter however end up being Sues.
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