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MyUsedRomance 10/11/09 . chapter 1In short, Sasuke thought, he had lost his specificity. “I’m looking at you,” he said. “I'm looking at you now. Do you understand?” “Yes,” she said. dammit. i hate you for making me want to be in love and fuck this, it's just too great and it was awesome. and i dont know it's making me feel so much when it shouldn't. it shouldn't be like this. love it. |
bergundy 10/10/09 . chapter 1Teehee. Now that that's out of the way... This was pleasant.I know some authors whose work I used to like, until I realized they liked beating the fact that "Sasuke regrets losing Sakura SO, SO MUCH and is going to become horribly soppy" into the reader's head too much. This reads more subtly - even if he feels that, he's not going to "go for it" at once. Nice oneshot. :) |
pockybandits89 10/9/09 . chapter 1tied together nicely at the end with reference to the first line, nice! I see lots of meaning into this and I think the interactions played put fairly nicely. Looking forward to more stories like this, I prefer these drama/angst/romance ones but at times I read humorous fics. |
TwistedInABottle 10/8/09 . chapter 1Wonderful blanket. Is this a ONESHOT? or is there more? Anyway, spectacular job! Pakapaws claws |
AdotD 10/8/09 . chapter 1Thank you. |
The Disappeared 10/6/09 . chapter 1That was great! I especially enjoyed the technique you used at the beginning - a quick, effective way to grab the reader's attention. Great job! |
Mai Sode no Shirayuki 10/5/09 . chapter 1hey i loved it! It was a really cool idea, one i haven't seen before. It usually takes something like Sakura distancing herself for Sasuke to realize that he's in love with her! |
extraordinaire 10/3/09 . chapter 1I really love the way this was written. You didn't just come out with whatever you were saying, but it was "hidden". As you intended, I know, but it was incredibly cute. Keep writing :) |
Nilie 9/30/09 . chapter 1Excellent. You've managed subtle so very well! :D Fine piece. Love, Blanket! |
cast14 9/29/09 . chapter 1great story i loved it |
thinkthoughts 9/29/09 . chapter 1i like it lots! are you gonna continue it? |
SunshineandDaisys 9/27/09 . chapter 1I just had, like, a fangirl fit? I don't even know what to call it. I DIED a happy little death inside because that ending was so goddamn perfect, BUT, Kishimoto probably isn't going to be adopting it. asdfghjkl; Seriously, though, it was. Perfect. Agonizingly so. How very much like Sasuke to develop a passion for something he's lost. He was born to be a masochist, that one. And such a douche, telling all the guys how he thought she wasn't worth looking at! I would like to think if she hadn't interrupted that Naruto might've brought some form of hurt down on him. I mean, geez. Unless one of them asked. But still! Ah, digression. In short: loved it. Best part: abrupt confession. Worst part: none. |
theforesttree 9/26/09 . chapter 1Confusing, but utterly perfect. |
sonia 9/25/09 . chapter 1 Finally when Sakura given up then he noticed her worth! Stupid man! hahaha... Thanks for the story. |
vikkaayBYAH 9/25/09 . chapter 1That last little part where Sasuke approached her was epic. Like, it deserves the whole shebang, with the camera and the movie awards. But I guess, you could consider this review an award? Great writing! . |