WOw

Wow. Just amazing.

not sure if this belongs in Fanfiction, but it gave me the chills (the good kind) kudos

Wow, are there going to be more poem-like chapters?

I like the way its written, you could give Hayley a run for her money, shes amazing at poems.

It is quite creepy, I bet you will have given me night mares *covers eyes*

I'm joking.

I like "Her mirror reflection, her other self, lies awakened"

That was very haunting.

It flowed really well, I didn't know you could do beautiful poems too!

I'm very jealous.

I'm also loving the last three lines.

Amazing read, well done, and thanks for posting!

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I see what you mean. It's really creepy, but dark and interesting. I love it, you're a really amazing poet.

Yeah... talk about creepy! lol P

That was really quite scary...

But amazing!

I hope you're still on...

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