Lovely story. Just what I've been wanting to read about this character.

That was pretty much perfect in my opinion. I'm a big fan of Evram and Claire-and of course, as with all the astronauts-there's a story about why someone so flawed was picked by the program.

Your explanation of why Evram is there is great. Your writing was nicely spare and to the point, but really evocative. Thanks for sharing!

That was really well done, the conclusion was just mind blowing. I didn't see it coming, but I can totally picture Claire doing that.

Aw, wow. really amazing. great character descriptions. very, very sweet. just beautiful overall.

So nice

You packed so much into so few words. You really captured the relationship, the obvious love. I liked how Claire knows him better than himself and how Evram sees how important she is to him. (I also liked the visual you gave me of Wass dumping a totally blitzed Evram into a cab while Claire hovered)

Thank you

This is brilliant. It's got everything it needs, especially the ending. It portrays feelings and emotions. Well done!

AirDragon717

interesting idea. thanks for sharing!

This was absolutley beautiful. I think your portrayal of Evram's addiction was so realistic. Great job!