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Reviews for: Perpetual Motion Machine
Carnage Falcon
2009-09-22 . chapter 1
The more of these I read, the more inspired I get to finish the first loop of the game already so I can get a dose of Meria for myself. Excellent oneshot, though; you do a good job of getting into Meria's head.
Mauyn Eign
2009-09-20 . chapter 1
I'm not far enough in the game to be familiar with most of what you write; the Meria-centric stuff, at least...

But it's all so well written and pretty and I'm finding myself pitying Meria now despite having hardly a clue what's going on.

And gah, your writing is starting to make me dread getting to BlueKitten.
Spheria25
2009-09-20 . chapter 1
This is my first time reading something good like this! ^_^ Thanks for making such a wonderful story! Hope you will make something similiar like this too ;)
Megaolix
2009-09-19 . chapter 1
Yeah... I was kinda angry with the endings available for blue route so I can say I like this for sure. Sadistic choice indeed...

And this fic is kinda of a follow-up to the one just before, am I wrong? Well, both were good so I won't complain.

I have no idea if this one will have a sequel, but it would be interesting to see what is restored and not... I mean, just what happens after the nightmare is broken?

Ah well. I'm sure you'll write more and I'll see that scenario eventually. Go Feral!
Mini Nephthys
2009-09-19 . chapter 1
...I don't know enough about Knights in the Nightmare to understand most of the context, but you have a really lyrical way with words that made this worth the read. That, plus the super-cute ending that actually makes some sense to me.
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