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| LadyKisaragi 2006-11-14 ch 13,  | abuseWas this the last chapter of the story? I quite enjoyed it really it was fun and entertaining. I think you captured Auron and Rikku very well, I quite enjoyed this. |
| Bratney 2005-08-22 ch 13, | abuseI love it |
| Queen of the Insects 2005-07-23 ch 13, anon. | abuseThis fic is, to put it blunty, simply amazing. To elaborate on that, I think that you have done a wonderful job of keeping them in character, and still creating a relationship between them. And what you've done and written is so deep, so touching, and so different from most other fanfics! You've made it work in a way that it completely believable. *sigh* It is a tad depressing when you read a wonderful story and learn that it is incomplete. Although I do understand about writer's block. I do hope you finish this fic, even if it's years from now! |
| Shido21 2005-06-23 ch 13, | abuseI really loved your story. I think it's one of the best Aurikkus out there. I hope that you can continue it soon, but I understand if it is difficult to get back to. Thanks for writing such a wonderful story in the first place. |
| Winter Faerie 2004-12-28 ch 13, anon. | abuseThough somewhat rheortical, I'd still like to ask: Why bother start a story if you are not going to finish it? Why don't you finish it? I'm probably being hypocritical because I might have done the same thing, but I have never wrote a story, so I'm just speaking of my free rights, and if I seem rude--which I know I do--you'll just ignore this because you don't know me. 2 years and 9 months have gone since you've updated, all of which was probably just corrections of the original story you apparently made. Rather then beg you like others to finish this story, I ask you--with pride and honour, no matter how dumb it sounds--to finish this story some way or another, for you did think of the idea in the first place. Search your imagination like you did when you first loved the game, story, and couple, and please finish this story. |
| DeesseMew 2004-10-31 ch 3, | abusekeep it going PLEASE ^_^ |
| DeesseMew 2004-10-31 ch 13, | abusebeautifull. i want the next XD |
| Rikku-Sphere Hunter 2004-08-14 ch 13, | abusePlease keep going, i like your story alot. ^^ |
| wickedsugarrush 2004-08-01 ch 1, | abuseNOO u MUST belive!! The age is actully no obtstical! ^^ My parents are 11 years apart ^^ And YES it IS POSSIBLE!! People really dont know things about the far plane however the creators left enough evidence to assume ((and factully)) Peice together their relationship! ^^ |
| wickedsugarrush 2004-08-01 ch 13, | abuseThis is turning out to be a really wonderful fic ^^ Rikku seems differnet. Just as you planned it I am sure ^^ |
| RGrurounigirl 2004-07-19 ch 11, | abuselemon scene sounds very intersting to me! |
| Rikku 2004-06-27 ch 13, anon. | abuseEND: NO! END:NO! END:NO! END:NO! (Im just gonna get on with it) END:NO! PS END:NO :) |
| ParvisSira 2004-06-19 ch 13, | abuseCan I beg, please...I would love to see more. I think you have an accurate and realistic portrayal of Auron and Rikku, of them growing and as the title says of maturity. Thanks for the wonderful story. |
| kdmluv 2004-01-18 ch 1, anon. | abusethis is the first review ive done it just goes to show u how good it is please write more |
| WaitinInShadows 2004-01-15 ch 11, | abuseRead this a couple of days ago, just getting around to reviewing now. I hope u start this one up again soon. It seems great, although something weird is going on with the text. |