OH GOODNESS! YOU UPDATED! YAY! =D I LIKED THIS CHAPPIE...NO MATTER HOW KINDA SHORT IT WAS. I HOPE THE NEXT ONE IS LONGER, AND I HOPE EVERYTHING TURNS OUT OK! I CAN'T WAIT FOR NEXT CHAPPIE! YAY!! =DD

Hey! :-] Sorry I haven't Been able to update my story, But its a bad case of writers block, just sizzling up there... :] Maube It will clear up after Friday, when I have my "Power Of the Pen" Writing competition! ;D So, Yupp! I hope you start writing more!

Happy W... Ehr... Vera-ing? xD Bye!

~Lilly L. Lancelott

Awesome Chapter, though Bowser needs a Slap to the Face for being so Cruel to his Son I mean if the Koopaling's Mother was still alive on here I would think she would be very mad at Bowser's Actions, but any way is Bowser going throw the Mario Family in the Lava to get back at Vera?

O_O ...wow...I just read every single chapter straight on and It was TOTALLY AMAZING!! I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER! 8D

Thanks very much for fourteen to twenty. Wow.

OH MY GOODNESS!! I'VE READ THE PAST FEW CHAPTERS AND IT'S AWESOME! =D I'M TOTALLY SUBSCRIBING!!

Wow! first off, I'd like to wish you, and all others a Merry christmas! Secondly, I'd love to tell you that this is almost the second to best chapter! :-) Keep it up.!

Awesome Chapter! sad how Mario Clan and Koopa Clan are acting to Roy and Vera's being together and even more so when Bowser Banishes his own son,
any way keep up the great job

Greeat chapter! please continue! :D

GREAT! Nineteen already? wow! :-)

Awesome Chapter! I Can't Wait for Chapter 19 :D
I think I'll do a New Drawing of Barbara Koopa-Mario, any way keep up the Great Job This Story is Great :)

Awesome Chapter!
and Vera is with her Family again...only in a Dangerous place with a Army
of Skeletons wanting to eat them, Vera and Roy should Make up a Attack together to Beat the Skeleton Army it be Cool if Vera Had some kinda Magical Sword that if she fond she could beat any enemy :)
any way keep up the Awesome Job

LOL :-) WONDERFUL chapter. Really, Continue or I'll send some skeletons of my own to capture you. xD jk, or am I? ^-^ loll

family reunion! in a life and death situation that is...

AWESOME CHAPTER!
AND THE GRAVE YARD LAND AND THE SKELETONS ADDED TO IT!
and the Scene with Roy and Vera was so Sweet, and I was all so thinking if Bowser wont let his Son be with Vera wouldn't Mario be the Same and wont let
his Daughter be with Roy the Son of his Arch Enemy?
and if that happens would Vera and Roy have to Run off and Elope in Marrymore that Marriage resort place from Super Mario RPG: Legend of The Seven Stars, lets hope they Don't Drive them to Eloping with out a Wedding with out there Friends and Family but any way Keep up the Awesome work.