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Hayashi Nariiko
2009-11-24 . chapter 1
OHMYFACKINGLORD, ALFRED. xD
-died ofteh giggles-
But, on a serious [is that even possible?] note:
AH~ -swoons-
Screw no plot, that was beautifully written. And made me feel bad.
Which is a good thing. xD
S-so, yes. Keep it up?! Totally?! xD Ahahaha... >w<
Inari Kasugawa
2009-11-14 . chapter 1
:D

is there really anything more to say?
Mytho Del Rosa
2009-11-12 . chapter 1
OAO

I...I think...um...you should like...totally involve Alfred next time...yeah...totally...um...*shifty eyes*

*sits in a corner needing a moment*

Damn...I honestly wasn't expecting a threesome...holy cow...I know it's been said but...damn...that was hot O^O.
Alfred
2009-11-09 . chapter 1
N-U-U-U-U-U-U-U, why'd you have to do that on my vintage Superman sheets...?
(All kidding aside...damn, that was EPIC. Very, very, very...wow. *heehee-total-nosebleed*)
Aussie-limey
2009-10-31 . chapter 1
BAHAAHAA *major nosebleed* this was so hot! ya wanna join in XD

lolz Al missed out on the smut

MARRY ME!
Tainted Tuesday
2009-10-20 . chapter 1
LMFAO. THE LAST LINE WAS PURE WIN. xD Oh Alfred, I feel for you.

This was so hot -3-

But really, someone remind me to NEVER read smut again while listening to stand up comedy... it doesn't match.

I don't know how many times I had to bury my face in my hands while laughing like a maniac.

Anyway, great fic ;3
Arkhadiam
2009-10-08 . chapter 1
Whoa. This is like one of the hottest things I´ve read. Ménage à trois is pure hot luv.
Congrats!
-Minosuke Ichigo-
2009-10-01 . chapter 1
O/O

O-oh wow...*fans face* I think I have a new Hetalia addiction...*claps hands* I loved it! I hope to see more of these three in the future from you sometime! ^_^

Poor Alfred! XD But...that's just his luck.
firedragongirl
2009-09-27 . chapter 1
I love how Alfred at the end isn't like, "WHAT DID YOU GUYS DO?!" but instead more like,

"HOW COME ON >MY< BED?!"

xD Awesome. Type more like this please! xD
Tootsieroll90
2009-09-23 . chapter 1
lmaolmaolmaolmao! i luvd the ending!! XD i also luvd to whole thing! so HAWT!! >:D
it was wonderful and funny too X3
anon anon anon
2009-09-23 . chapter 1
lol@america

loved it<3
Stella Solaris
2009-09-20 . chapter 1
*drol* the fic was awesomely hot and the ending Epic lol.
Anon
2009-09-20 . chapter 1
Ya' missed all the fun Alfred. Tsktsk.
That was lovely, marry me? <3
AEDReaper
2009-09-19 . chapter 1
best threesome ever.
Five Tailed Demon Dog
2009-09-19 . chapter 1
I think I love you...
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