 ForeverFallen304 2009-11-21 . chapter 2omg too sad T_T I wish he came back to life, its too sad. but great job non-the-less. |
 ChocoBits Daioh 2009-11-04 . chapter 2I...Oh god. This is bloody BRILLIANT. BEAUTIFUL. BREATHTAKING.
I sobbed torrents while reading this ;_; I absolutely love it though. Thank you for writing this piece of art ;3; |
 Andreaeb182 2009-11-01 . chapter 2Ohh crap... i'm crying like a baby... I'm too emotional today... and this fic was like a time bomb that broke me down... i remembered a person, a loved one, that had to depart from me, and never come back.
She was so young, why she had to die?! That's what i wonder to myself, and i'm right now, crying like Arthur for a good friend that will never smile to me again...
But i'm smiling too... i couldn't bring to cry in public so, it feels ok to do it now. I feels good. thanks a lot...
Andrea |
 freakanature 2009-10-27 . chapter 2This is absolutely beautiful. You had me bawling by the end of it. And a well-developed look at the mindset of someone who's lost someone dear. Thank you for this.
~ME~ |
 Akemi Tsuki Hikari 2009-10-04 . chapter 2Damnit! You made me cry! ;~; Amazing. Absolutely magnificent. |
 Andeor 2009-09-23 . chapter 2Bonjour à toi ! Well, I'd just want to say that your story is very captivating and moving, your writing is awesome. But a part of it just fell apart when I read your French words ;-)
"Je t'aime si beaucoup" just sounds horrible ^^ It's: "Je t'aime tellement" or "Je t'aime tant" or "Je t'aime tellement fort". And I wouldn't say "Mon cher", which is quite formal in French, but "chéri" (not "mon chéri", doesn't sounds right for me).
But apart from that, you've done a really fantastic job ;-)
Thank you for that story !! |
 EmoLollipop 2009-09-20 . chapter 2MERDE. YOU HAVE ME TEARING UP. *chucks lollipops at you*
Which means you write well, cause it takes a lot for stories to tear me up. ;A;
augh. I have to write Alive!France nao. ;A; And stop imagining Iggy finding a little!France. augh. *banging head on desk*
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Have a keysmash. TTATT |
 KM Gilcrest 2009-09-20 . chapter 1 Let it be known that I have never once began fully crying when reading ANYTHING. Until today. I don't know how you did it, but all I can do is applaud you for your writing skill. Every element of the story was tolerably angsty and amazingly deep. It flowed so naturally I felt as though I was reading a book about characters you had created rather than just a fanfiction. You are an amazing writer.
...ahem... O-on a lighter note, I have never seen England and France's relationship portrayed in such a real way. It is sweet and unnerving at the same time. (^_^ ) The premise is perfect for England's tsundere to be cracked. An amazing work! |
 Corvyie 2009-09-19 . chapter 2I really loved your story~!! I'm a fan of angsty fics, and character death, as morbid as it may sound. I especially love this couple. FraUK~!
You captured their characters quite well, I liked your depiction of a depressed England. Him not being able to move on very well was an excellent point, especially when you think about the fact that he's still moping for losing America.
This story was really quite moving and touching. I really did love all of it! Thank you for writing it - you really made my day~! |