Congragulations! You made me bawl my head off. Seriously, that was so powerful and emotional, I thought my eyes would dry out. God, you're a freaking amazing writer! I can't wait for the last chappie! <3

~Chizu

this has been really good! i cant remember if you already told us the book you got the idea off of. if you have could you let me know? if you havent told us yet then dont worry, ill just wait and see :D but yeah, this is really good, i was hooked from the start :) cant wait for the next chapter!

I really love this story,is so vivid yet sad and the characters feel so real. The "he was my brother too.." is heartbreaking though can't wait for the conclusion.

NO!
I want the last chapter! :( Lol. I hate these evil cliffhangers! THEY ARE EVIL!

Oh, God, Leo! I hope everything is okay!

ok im reading this right i and just thought they fought each other... which didnt sound right, then i thought that leo died! then im like no! and all teary eyed that i couldnt even read! then im like yes! leo's alive! then no he's disfigured! im thinking leo's paralyzed or something since the axe hit his shell and poor mikey and leo and donnie and raph and splinter and omg you have to update sooner!

*speechless*

So first, yay for updating. Second, omg, now you've got me wondering if Leo even made it out okay. His spirit? Does that mean...:(

I love this, the flashbacks and internal struggle for Mikey is great. I don't think most people like doing a grown up Mike (does seem a bit weird), but you've done him well.

While I'll be sad when it's over, it was definitely worth the read.

ARGH? UPDATE SOON!
-Lon

This story continues to astound me!
Looking forward to the next/last chapter.

*Sniff*...Oh my gosh, that's just so...sad! I... I just wanna curl up in a little ball and cry! All the cookies in the world aren't enough for Leo. *Sniff*

But he... he's not necessarily... ya know, DEAD, right? I mean... he could be... *sniff*

Ok, gonna go find a hanky. Please don't wait another two weeks to update! And it wasn't too long, I wish there had been more! Even if it DOES make me want to cry!

Polaris

PLEASE! Don't make me wait two more weeks for the last chapter! PLEASE!

finally the fight lol leo and mikey are the best
loved it again- update soon haha

Oh..for the love of...gah!! I hope that you can update soon, I hate to see this fic end because it is such a great read...but I must know what happened! Uh..please?

At first I'm thinking Leo's dead and then...not so sure...and then again...arggh...update soon PLEASE!
-Lon

GAH! CLIFFIES! I HATE THEM! >P

I'm stills ticking with my original theory. ESPECIALLY after this chapter...

GRARH! I have met a lot of mean people in my life, but you are the worst! (LOL) WHAT HAPPENED TO LEO?!?! You're going to send me to an early grave! Strike that, I don't want you to get any ideas... No graves! Right? If I find out they BURIED Leo at the farm, I'll be very upset!

Stop talking about last words and floral wreaths! It makes me think of funerals! ARGH I'm so frustrated right now! =D If he can settle with seeing him, that means he's alive, right?

Heh heh, I keep thinking you can't possibly drag out the suspense a whole lot longer... and you keep proving me wrong... even though you're killing me, I love this! ;)

Polaris