got mixed up with legendaries ( picked off top of head.) how about Raikou instead?

Name: Madge Aerrow
Nickname: Ro (only select few call her this)
Age: 19
Hometown/Home Region: Johto
Family: Lief (Brother)-23- Trainer in Kanto
Sam (Brother)- 17- Coordinator (and he is gay fyi) in Shinnoh

Pokemon:
Rhydon-Quake- His ability is Lightning Rod. Rhydon was Madge’s first pokemon which she caught at age 11 because it protected her from a group of Donphan. Usually kept out of its pokeball, Rhydon is a fiercely loyal and somewhat stubborn pokemon. Even if Madge agreed with trading him, he would not listen to the other trainer at all. Seperates the other pokemon (Voltz and Nimbus) when they fight, and he is Madge’s most powerful—and used- pokemon. His moves are Horn Attack, Earthquake, Hammer Arm, Iron Tail, Flamethrower, Mega Horn, Surf, Dragon Pulse, and Shockwave.
Jolteon- Voltz- His ability is Volt Absorb, allowing him to absorb electric based attacks –Her 2nd pokemon, Found him in the Ilex Forest as an Eevee after it got lost searching for food, she nicknamed it Voltz because right away Madge knew which evolve form she wanted. A usually lazy prankster, Voltz is usually called “a Sneasel in disguise” by Madge and prefers battling to contests. His moves are Thunder Fang, Pin Missile, Thunder, Discharge, Dig, Swift (Move Tutor), Quick Attack, and Agility
Ivysaur- Evergreen- Her ability is Overgrow. Madge found Evergreen as a bulbasaur egg when she tripped over as she walked through the forest looking for Voltz who was showing off his speed. A generally calm Pokemon, Evergreen gets agitated when she loses. Her moves are Vine Whip, Razor Leaf, PoisonPowder, Energyball, Tackle, Sludge Bomb and Secret Power.
Quilava- ‘Cano- His ability is Flash Fire. Although at the time Madge had her other three pokemon, Prof. Elm decided Madge showed promise as a trainer and let her choose a starter. Madge chose ‘Cano, at that time a Cyndaquil, because he showed bravery. A rash, bold, and brave pokemon, he rarely plays around and trains even when let out to relax. His moves are Swift, Flame Wheel, Flame Thrower, Smokescreen, Dig, Focus Punch, Aerial Ace, Crush Claw, and Heat Wave.
Golduck-Hydro- Her ability is Cloud Nine. When caught, Hydro was a psyduck that was stealing medicine, trying to find one to help her headache. Now, as a Golduck, Hydro is calm and collected—always. Her moves are Zen Headbutt, Psychic, Water Pulse, Aqua Jet, Hydro Pump, Blizzard, Ice Beam, Shadow Claw, and Cross Chop.
Pidgeot- Nimbus- His ability is Tangled Feet. A pokemon with a Holier-Than-Thou attitude, this newest addition to Madge’s team is her least used because it is too prideful. Not much to say about this pokemon but the fact that Madge is going to train it until it listens faithfully. His moves are Steel Wing, Gust, Twister, Air Slash, Swift, Air Cutter, Sky Attack, and Ominous wind.

Appearance: 5 foot 9 with a wiry, athletic body, she has creamy brown skin, high cheek bones, and a graceful face. Her light grey eyes aren’t cold or warm, simply calming. Her eyes start wider towards her nose, then they slope down with long lashes. Her light orange hair is messy, in a messy but classic braid to her shoulder blades that she keeps behind her back, with some stray pieces here and there, and two hair pieces framing her face and go until 2 inches below her chin.
Clothing: Wears a high collared, long sleeved, silver half jacket that goes just below the chest. Underneath her jacket is a somewhat baggy green tank and then she has khaki cargo shorts that go to her knees, with leggings that go to mid calf, the color of her jacket. Upon her feet are light green converse hightops.
Personality: Have you ever had a strong, responsible person you looked up to? Well Madge is at least strong. Though around people she only talks as much is required, she is very talkative around her pokemon. Once you know her well, you can describe her as a sarcastic and somewhat negative individual who regards those who slack off as bad trainers. She does not act all high and mighty or go around trying to only tell the truth, but shell do what she wants as she sees fit and will let you know her opinion if she has one.
History: Not too interesting but the fact is she is over shadowed by her siblings and that her parents died due to a scheme run by team Rocket and Galactic combined might make it a little better. Became a trainer at age 11, traveled in almost every region, she took a two year break starting at 15 but soon went back to training.
Goals: To become the strongest trainer she can, and to do anything in her power to help pokemon when they get captured or whatnot by Team Magma, Aqua, Rocket, or Galactic.
Accomplishments: eight badges from all regions but Kanto (will go there to battle her brother when she deems herself strong enough.)
Years as a Trainer: eight, six if you exclude her years on break.
Crush: Do not know the other characters yet, will depend. PM with suggestions if you'd like
Side: Neutral but will be good when need be
Partner: Azelf
Likes: Books, Pokemon, Beef Jerky, Training, Battling, Traveling, and Trainers who try their best
Dislikes: Slackers, Movies, Nosy Adults, not good with children, the four teams of bad guys, and a few coordinators who look down on battling
Addtional Information: Always has a candy cigarette in her mouth (you can omit this if you see fit)

i am getting more and more interested with the plot. feels like something is being hidden. especially with the "another pawn under our control". the characters you picked are interesting. cant wait to see what happens

Okay...this will be my first OC and then I'll send another one in later, maybe.

Name: Luna Suni Dijjon

Nickname: Pale Freak of the Sun (will be explained in History)

Age: 16

Hometown/Home Region: Canalave City, Sinnoh

Family: -Father, Joseph, age 45, works in the Canalave Library as a librarian.
-Mother, Seline, age 43, works as an assistant for Professor Rowan in Sandgem Town.
-Older Sister, Mara Belle, age 25, works in Saffron City Silph Co. as one of the directors. Didn’t like to be a Pokemon trainer, wanted to be a traveling businesswoman instead
-Younger Brother, Devon, age 13, aims to be a Sailor and travel the entire Pokemon world. Currently a novice Pokemon trainer with the starter Pokemon Turtwig, a Starly, and a Bidoof.
-Grandmother Sheila (on Father's side), age 65, Pokemon coordinator who occaisionally appears in Hearthome to partake in Contests. Most of the time she lives in Saffron City.
-Grandfather Roland (on Mother's side), age 70, lives in Mossdeep City, Hoenn, volunteers at the Space Center. Was a Pokemon breeder in his earlier years.

Pokemon:
1) Empoleon: Male
Nicknamed Emperor.
Was Luna's starter Pokemon at the start of her journey. They both have quiet natures and tend to keep to themselves much. Emperor is the silent leader of the rest of Luna's Pokemon, like her second-in-command. He is used for surfing across bodies of water, and somewhat dislikes it. Luna trusts Emperor the most and can somehow read his emotions. Emperor can also understand his trainer, having the ability to attack in battle without being told to.
Torrent: Powers up Water-type moves in a pinch.
Quiet nature, like his trainer.
Surf, Brine, Hydro Cannon, Metal Claw, Swords Dance, Hydro Pump, Blizzard, Ice Beam, Return, and Drill Peck.

2) Staraptor: Female
Nicknamed Star.
Luna’s second Pokemon. Is bold and daring, but rarely disobeys her trainer. Is chivalrous and protects the others from danger. Doesn’t appreciate being in her Pokeball, likes flying in the sky instead. Used for transportation as well. Emperor and Star are partners in Double Battles, even though their views are different. The strongest combination and powerhouses in her team.
Intimidate: Lowers the foe’s Attack stat.
Brave nature.
Fly, Defog, Close Combat, Aerial Ace, Brave Bird, Double Team, Agility, Take Down, Endeavor, and Roost.

3) Solrock: Nicknamed Socko.
Obtained from her grandfather in Mossdeep City, Hoenn when she visited him at age 9, though she was unable to use it until she became Champion of Sinnoh. Socko is lazy, preferring to attack at will, whenever it wants to. Only gets along well with those who speak little or not at all, meaning Emperor and Luna. Speaks telepathically to its trainer and to the other Pokemon.
Levitate: Gives full immunity to all Ground-type moves.
Lax nature.
Heal Block, Trick Room, Fire Blast, Rock Tomb, Sunny Day, Solar Beam, Psybeam, Calm Mind, and Sandstorm.

4) Lunatone: Nicknamed Luna2.
Also obtained from her grandfather in Mossdeep City, Hoenn and also was unable to use until she was Champion. Luna2 is the opposite of Socko, being louder and more agreeable. It is friendly with all of Luna’s Pokemon, except Socko. The only problem is, like Socko, it prefers to attack at will. Luna2 and Socko are Double Battle partners, thought they cannot get along. Both are the defense mechanisms in her team.
Levitate: Gives full immunity to all Ground-type moves.
Relaxed nature.
Psychic, Embargo, Stone Edge, Rest, Future Sight, Rock Polish, Hypnosis, Ice Beam, and Stealth Rock.

5) Marowak: Male
Nicknamed Mario.
Obtained from Mara, who received it as a job well done from her boss. So therefore he’s a recent addition to the team. Generally positive in attitude. Doesn’t mind losing, and sometimes is bothered when everyone else is down in the dumps. Likes fooling around with his club, throwing it around and almost hitting others.
Lightningrod: The Pokémon draws in all Electric-type moves.
Jolly nature.
Bone Club, Boomerang, Bone Rush, Focus Energy, Fling, Iron Tail, Earthquake, Secret Power.

6) Gengar: Female
Nicknamed Ginger.
Another gift obtained from Mara. The dark horse of the team, she prefers solitude rather than conversing with the other Pokemon. Quick on her feet in battle and somehow untrustworthy, always ending up with interesting items in her hands. Ginger is the newest addition to the team. She and Mario are partners in Doubles, but the Shadow Pokemon despises working with him. Both are the speed demons of the group.
Levitate: Gives full immunity to all Ground-type moves.
Hasty nature.
Nightmare, Destiny Bond, Curse, Confuse Ray, Spite, Mean Look, Shadow Punch, and Shadow Ball.

Appearance: Jet black hair that has maroon stripes in it (it falls slightly in curls over her shoulders). Has silver eyes and pale skin. She's Asian. Height: 5'6". Weight: 130 lbs. Body Build: She looks thin and malnourished, but she's not (meaning chest size: nada/smaller than average). She's actually quite healthy and quick on her feet.

Clothes: She wears a black poncho over a gray long-sleeved shirt, blue capri pants, and black flip-flops (in the winter and fall she'll wear the same poncho and shirt, but navy pants and black combat boots.) Pajamas/Swimwear: Silver nightie that reaches past her knees and above her ankles for pajamas. Black and white bathing suit for swimwear. She uses a backpack to carry all her essentials and a belt bag for her Pokeballs.

Personality: Luna is the quiet type. But if she has anything to say, she'll say it. Sometimes she bottles in her anger up so much that she accidentally takes it out on her loved ones. She’ll inwardly hate a person (its rare she will, seeing as how she basically ignores those she‘ll not get along with), not say anything, and have like an Inner-Sakura grudge against them, which leads to her downfall. She is devoted to training and battling with her Pokemon. She cares for them deeply. Is strategic. Also impatient when something takes too long. Her intelligence and unique ideas are usually not recognized or acknowledged . She dislikes some cute Pokemon, like Pachirisu or Buneary, because she finds them rather annoying, but others, like Togepi or Pichu, she finds useful.

History: Luna was born in Saffron City, Kanto. At age 5 she moved to her current residency, Canalave City, Sinnoh, due to her mother’s job switch (Seline was also working at Silph Co. at the time). Devon was 2 and didn’t recall living there. Mara, who was fifteen at the time, disliked moving (claiming Kanto was her home, not Sinnoh), and returned at 18 to live with her grandmother.
As a little vacation, Luna and her mother visted Grandpa Roland in Mossdeep City, Hoenn, at age 9. Luna was fascinated by the Mossdeep Space Center and its rockets, wishing she could see a Pokemon from space. Roland made her promise that if she became Champion of her region, she would receive his old Pokemon, Solrock and Lunatone.
Thus began her goal, even if it was for a silly reason. At 10, she picked Piplup as her starter, finding a preference in Water types at the time. Her journey to the Elite Four took 3 years, making her quite impatient. Her team at the time consisted of Emperor, Star, a Luxray, a Kricketot, a Togekiss, and Bibarel (the remaining 4 are in her PC, by the way.. She challenged Cynthia directly (not before defeating the Elite Four first), and barely survived. By then, she had forgotten about the promise, only wanting to win to be the best.
After becoming Champion and obtaining Luna2 and Socko, Luna set out for Kanto. Because of her young age, her quiet personality, her pale skin, and her passion for battling, people began to call her the “Pale Freak of the Sun”. She basically ignored them, and although she lost to Lance at age 15, she was determined to not loose again.
Currently, she is trying to win all the silver and gold prints at the Sinnoh Battle Frontier. When she has them all, she’ll go to Hoenn to try and become the Champion.
*Mario was received right after her lost to Lance, perhaps Mara felt he would comfort her. Ginger, on the other hand, was received on her a few days before her 16th birthday.

Goals: Becoming Champion in all four regions. Being recognized as a top battler by the famous, maybe even become a Gym Leader?

Accomplishments: Sinnoh Champion at age 13.

Years as a Trainer: 6

Crush: I’ll read on and see who’s suitable.

Side: Good.

Partner: Azelf

Likes: Training her Pokemon, silence, looking up at the sky and taking it all in, Water, Psychic, and Ghost types.

Dislikes: Being defeated, things taking too long, Pachirisu, Buneary and its evolved form, annoying cute Pokemon (not all of them)

Additional Information: When she has time, she enjoys reading action/adventure movies and books and listening to foreign and exotic music.

Hope you like her!

~U.S.

Great first chapter! It was quite long, so that's always a good thing in my opinion. I couldn't find any grammatical or spelling errors, but I'm pretty bad at that sort of thing unless it's blatantly obvious, so maybe listening to me is not the most practical idea...Anyway, you requested more guys, so I'll PM, you one, if that's all right. And if you're not sick of me, courtesy of my other unbearably long OC submission. Can't wait for an update!

Woo! Finally an update, was looking forward to it. Cant wait for the next chapter for obvious reasons lol. Grammer and flow of text was great, as for the intros to the characters, short and sweet...you dont have them set in stone. By that i mean, we dont know all about them, so leaves us eager to see more. Just one thing in your character Zekes team...should be Skarmory but blah im just looking for errors, ignore me haha. Hope life gives ya enough time for a quick update.

For intros, this is great! You can tell only a small bit of the characters personality, which is something thats a refreshing change. Your grammer and spelling is above par.

I hope your life settles down a bit.

-Bree

I am curious as to how one goes about incoporating OCs into their story without their owner barging in too much. Then again, I'm still very new to the fanfiction side of the fandom...

I am curious! I shall lurk, perhaps let a Rocket Member from my bunch of characters enter.

Actual review wise, your writing is solid so far. Grammer, spelling and the such are all good, and so far the OC owners seem happy with your potrayal.

The flow is very nice aswell, it's brief but enough so that we know what is happening. I'm interested in how it will flow throughout the rest of the story.

Already, I'm trying to desipher whats going to happen during this story. Beleive me, when I start trying to desipher after 1 chapter, it means I think a story seems extremely interesting. I'll PM you a character in around a half an hour.

And here I was, thinking you'd completely forgotten about this! =D Looking awesome, especially now that you've revealed more information about what's going on. I am so psyched to learn more about the plot.

Aaron and Zeke seem different and very interesting, and the way they're heading off this tournament is original and something I haven't seen before. The OC intros were good, too- I grinned at Stub's cameo, and Jamie's Banette is certainly interesting!

Update as soon as your life settles down- I can certainly sympathize with having too much going on, but also want to read more! =P And don't worry about Seth, I'm just still shocked that you're using him. Anywho, looking great so far!

Heh, you got Hailey's personality straight on...Well, with as little as it's been for now. But I have confidence that you got her down.

Also, it seems a lot of people entered girl OCs. Hmm...

Keep on Writing!

Oh, wow, this sounds really interesting. I'm excited to see what you do with it. Alex sounds really interesting as well. I''l be sending my character now. Can't wait for an update!

Interesting fic. I'll PM my character soon. Nice details for your character. how many characters per author are you accepting?

okay, refuse to submit an Oc without first reviewing...dam my morality. Sounds like an unreal idea...Hope my Oc is alrite for it

Name: Maikeru Tapang
Nickname: Michael, Mai, mikey/Monkey (little kids and some others call him the last two)
Age: 17
Hometown/Home Region: none, doesn't remember so always moving
Family: none, went out in a crash

Pokemon:
Eevee-Umbreon-f-
found Eevee alone in allyway at 4, after some tries bonded with each other, after afew years is still shy around people and uses it to her advantage in battle,when agitated strength and speed greatly increases. she's one of two that keeps the group in check.
ability: synchronize
nature:quiet
moves:return, flash, iron tail, quick attack, mean look, psychic, hyper beam

Abra-Kadabra-alakazam-m-
hatched from an egg which was a gift from a old couple when 10. since then been training both its mental and physical powers. while seemingly laidback is the other half keeping the team in check.
ability: inner focus
nature:calm
moves:teleport, double team, calm mind, confusion, psycho cut, focus punch, protect, drain punch, psybeam

Magikarp-Gyarados-f-
bought Magikarp at a low price from the Magikarp salesman after creeping him out and ruining some business. after some quick and intense training quickly evolved into Gyarados, at first hard to control, but after some time and bonding grew calmer and now able to channel her temper and force to greatly enhance her attacks.
ability:intimidate
nature:lonely
moves:bite, dragon rage, hyper beam, water pulse, thunder, strength, roar, stone edge

Nidoran-Nidorino-Nidoking-m-
was caught after over whelming him in battle, after that his goal and training increased its abilities. he has become very hyper and protective due to it combining some cunning with raw power.
ability:posion point
nature:impish
moves:focus energy, hidden power, taunt, hyper beam, brick break, endure, mega punch, fire blast

Graveler-Golem-m-
won Graveler from a one sided battle with a rookie trainer. mainly very bored and quick to finish things, for some reason will take the hit for a partner in double battles.
ability:sturdy
nature:hardy
moves:defense curl,rock polish, rollout, selfdestruct, earthquake, double-edge, hyper beam, flamethrower

Appearance:about 6'1 with short dark bule hair. has light brown skin with green/brown eyes which aren't seen due to his surfing sunglasses. a slightly athletic build has scar to the side of the head and one covering his entire spine, and weights about 240 but for some reason doesn't look it.

Clothing:mainly wears a worn out blue hoodie and a slightly burnt camo pants, also pair of surfing glasses that he almost always wears with black gloves. carries his things in a old heavy metal suitcase.

Personality: is very calm and has a hard time expressing strong emotion after the crash. mainly use gestures to communicate, but does talk when spoken to, in a bored monotone voice. while he doesn't show it he really cares about his pokemon and music. around a large group of people is very serious and straight to the poind, when alone or a very small group more friendly. made a habit of appearing behind people to scare them to his amusement.

History: parents were very strict and most of the time wasn't there, so he had to do things on his own and finish the things they left him to do. after finding and bonded with Eevee brought it to their place to keep and train much to his parents annoyance. when driving to a confrence the crashed leaving Maikeru injured and alone with Eevee. after a year in a hospital simply disappeared and started wondering around with Eevee and slowly built up his team. mainly traveling alone with his pokemon.

Goals: to balance his team out, own daycare
Accomplishments:won some tournaments and placed 4th to 7th in league
Years as a Trainer:7 as trainer, 3 wondering around, 10 total
Crush:This is optional and you can change it as the story progesses, Just send me a PM if it does.
Side: neurtral (mainly follows this 'what good and evil is only seen by the person and their reason')
Partner:Registeel?

Likes: being alone(used to it), music, being cold, horror, eading
Dislikes: bright light, loud noise, water, talking, large groups
Addtional Information: almost always tired