Eh! *dances* I love the whole 'he's saving me, it must be a dream' thing. Nice. Very nice. Keep up the good work!

You just like torturing them, don't you?! *dashes to next chapter with hope in her heart*

Gyeeah. I hate it in films when someone's under water and I end up going light-headed because I haven't been breathing either. You just made me do that. Thanks.
XD

Yay for not cooperating! I love the almost black eyed thing... I know it happens, but on the Doctor? Ohm nom...
Ahem.
Onwards!

I didn't see the chapter title for this till I was over halfway down the page and had reached the line it was taken from... and then I giggle-snorted. I adore your characterisation of nine, it's perfect!
Onwards to the next chapter! (this is a welcome relief from the headache nanowrimo's been giving me, I'd like to add XD)

Loved it! The two of them are so cute together.

Awesome...obviously the Doctor doesn't die. Right!?

Great story!! I can't wait to read more.