I really enjoyed this chapter, its very different from all the other fics I've read of Zidane's return. The end, especially, it was so good! Update soon, please! :D

I just realized today that the title for this story was actually said in game. xD I played that part today and was like "oh, ho!" :D

soo cute!! please continue soon^^

The narrative is well written, I feel like there is something missing in the beginning of chapter one but it mellowed out and got very emotional. I like the clever in's and out's, very descriptive and very within Garnet's character!

Update soon, please! :D

Nice story so far. Keep updating :D

This is such a sweet story- I look forward to reading more! I love how you write Garnet :)

It's heartbreaking so far, but wonderful to read! I really enjoy this story, but Garnet's perspective seems spot-on, and I love your take on her character so far! Plus, it's fun to see your take on the gap between after the last battle and the true finale of the game.

I do hope you post more of it--I want to see that happy ending eventually! <3 ^^

A really lovely look at the end from Garnet's perspective, since both your previous stories have been from male perspectives. FFIX isn't my favourite FF, but I like your style and portrayal or Garnet in the aftermath. Can't wait for more!

Take care,
CA

So far so good! I like it. It's rather sad, but I figured that was what happened after they left Zidane. Do you remember how many years it was in between leaving Zidane behind and Zidane showing up at the theater dramatic style? It's been so long since I've played that game. Anyways, great chapter! ::hand you internet cookies:: :)