good chapter but i can't believe how it ended. i really can't hate monique but i really dislike her right now. so close but then that had to happen. i will be waiting so eagerly for the next chapter.

I know this review is way overdue. I'm really sorry!

Anyway, on with the review!

I am still amazed at how creatively you twist old Disney movie scenes and make it work immensely well in your fic. Not only were you able to incorporate it in the very interesting dream sequences; you also made it funnier without going overboard. The way you also made a pun of those scenes was tastefully done - changing just a bit of it so that the readers can still identify what movie it was lifted from but still leaving your mark on it and making it your own.

Another thing I'm amazed at is how you slowly but surely add a unique personality to each of your own characters, mainly Gabrielle and Eva. They're not just there as flat, faceless supporting cast that you decided to throw in one day. You add dimension to your characters, a depth or a new layer in their personality in every chapter you write. It just shows how much thought, time and effort you have put to shape these characters. That is something other fanfic authors fail to do.

Although I already have an inkling as to how this fic would end, I'm still anticipating how you would write it down. Somehow when I read the posted chapters, I feel as if I didn't know what would happen next.

I'm so proud of you. Keep writing!

great job. glad it ended the way it did

Once again, another excellent chapter. The interplay between Shego and Kim is sublime, espcially during the dream. The way Kim seems to have fallen for Shego in the dream world and now the waking world is pretty awesome. I just hope Shego isn't too pissed when she finally comes back. Well, keep up the good work and I hope you update again soon.

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This is getting good.

LOL, you are an awesome writer. You really know how to bring out the emotions in your story.

I really like how you use Disney themes to get them together. The bit with the flamingo was funny. XD Gabrielle and Eva crack me up. Some things really do run through the family. :D

Heheheheh this keeps getting funnier and funnier! The dream was my favorite part and I felt like hurting Monique for coming up at the worst time.

Invader Johnny Signing Off.

I was almost lost but you put me back on the right trail.

*Cackles maddly* I laughed my ass off at the Little Mermaid bit! Ridiculously genius stupidity at it's absolute best! Love the chap!

Aww, I wan' an angry, possibly homicidal pirate to cuddle with! XD

Want the *blip*? Ok Eva's hot so I'll forgive her for being a little nuts. What the hell did Gabrielle and Eva used to do for work?

Son of a-- Damn you Monique, damn you to hell and back again!! I want my frickin' Kigo kiss you interruptive bitch!!

Oh, just for shits and giggles and little spoiler goodness, my Shego's real name is Scheherazad Gala Ordontez. Her nickname might be Odd. XD

A creative and well thought out fusion :)

While the first two chapters did start out as very crack-y, I enjoyed the slow transition from humor to drama. The later parts still show some of the humor, but it is definitely more serious as Kim and Shego near the deadline before Shego really dies. The narrative tone is also toning down more from the crack to a more serious storytelling technique and it indicates to the reader that amusing as the beginning was, there's some serious character development going on.

The dreams are definitely a treat, providing both the action and the catalyst for the entire plot. I find it interesting that the majority of the fic takes place in Kim's head and it leaves the reader unaware of what's going on in "real life" with only short appearances by other characters to prod Kim along.

I also noticed that Kim doesn't seem question or wonder about her odd dreams. Granted, she did have very graphic nightmares and might be taking these dreams in stride given that they're definitely the better alternative to having Shego rip out your own still-beating heart O.O Though later on, she will have to realize that her dreams are telling her something if she's going to haul ass and kiss Shego already.

Shego's lines are especially awesome, I laughed so much reading her rather inspired insults (a tricycle with training wheels, lul).

Awesome story man ^^) I was laughing my tail off about the Dumbies Guide to Parenting: What to do when they murder some one. I even started a Photoshop for it ill post it once im done lol

hehe, pretty good, look forward to more!

You're kickass! Keep it up.

Good chapter and story! I like this story, it's got a refreshing twist on the KP universe, and the way you portray Kim and Shego interacting in the dream world is very nice. The humor is some of the best I've read, it makes me laugh whenever I think about it. Well, keep up the good work and I hope you update again soon! Kigo rocks.

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