Very good story. The dialogue was superb and you provided some very descriptive scenes without going overboard. I especially liked the attire you came up with for Luna. Talk about ecclectic. Luna seeing the lollipop as a work of art. Yup. Only Luna could do that.

Very, very enjoyable and well-written story. Good job.

Aw so cute, and really well written.

Definitely sweet! XD

Awe, that was so sweet. I want an uber huge super colorful lolli now :)

Hilarious! Awesome one-shot, i can totally see this happening, good job, very funny.

This is so (pardon the pun) sweet!!

aww she thought it was art. So cute.

I love it! Luna is brilliant!

You did really good keeping Luna in character. It was so cute how Luna thought the candy was a piece of art.