You're, like, the master of the Guy/Natalia pairing. I mean, seriously. I already support the couple indefinitely, and you make it even more believable, if that's possible.

You basically take rank this pairing up to levels beyond the impossible. :)

ugh i know i just reviewed your other story but i'm here to say i love you

i really do

please don't run away from me now. i swear my love for you is pure

brb, creepin on your lj stories

Oh my, that was fluffy! I think I exploded. XD You captured their personalities well, the scene was well set-up... all of it was excellent. Great job!

I think this story is great, except a few things: I would first change the rating to M, because there are more than just sexual references in here. Second, I thought Guy was afraid of women, much less touching them or kissing one. Unless, of course, this is after the story ends. Then that's fine. So please take these comments into consideration. Other than that, great job!

-Celestia2009