Aw, it never continued...

I found this one actually much more compelling than the other one. I have a tendency to love romance, hehe. :)

please finish the story i love it

LIKE ALWAYS I LOVED IT. VERY ORIGINAL._ HOPE YOU MAKE THE THIRD CHAPTER

i love this story u just HAVE 2 continue it its soooooooooo good!

thanx

p.s plz continue it!

Oi! You gotta up date soon, Okay? Hope you get done with whatever story you're working with now so I can read the rest of this story! I read another of your stories called 'P,P,F(aka One Kiss)' gomen but I didn't want to type the whole thing, and I absolutely love it! O Anyways I like the story so far. Keep up the good work! Okay gonna go now!

Ja!

Natsumi .

U gotta update soon. Eo p.s good story so far.

So good. Please write more.

HEY I HAVE READ A LOT OF FAN FICTION BUT THIS ONE JUST SOME HOW TOPS THEM ALL SO I THINK YOUR A REALLY GOOD WRITER I READ A COUPLE OF YOUR OTHER STORIES REALLY GOOD I THINK IF YOU WROTE ANOTHER CHAPTER THAT THIS ONE WOULD BE GREAT TOO SO I HOPE YOU WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER BYE

More soon! _

this is a really neat story! !

I can't believe I'm just now reading this, It's great, I loved it.

i love it! this is gonna get good!

Very cool, though lots of the technical talk confuses me (I'm not a big trekky, but I am related to one) It's really cool, can't wait for more!

Cool! Write more please! Xaph you're the best!