aww. i love it!

That was sweet and very cute, and a little hot :) Very enjoyable!

Aww, that was great!

Nice thanks for writing this!

aw that was so cute. i miss this side of b&b too. hope it comes back soon! great job!

What I enjoyed most about your writing, in this story, is the subtlety. You imply a lot allowing the reader to come up with their own reasoning for the movements and words. (Example: "She feels his full body contact shift as he moves his hips back away from her and then pulls his arms away ...")

The second most enjoyable aspect about this story is the flirting, which again is subtle but steamy.

Really good tag.

ok, you should not be worried about characterization because it is pretty dead on! You should be posting more :) This was too adorable!

My favorite lines:

“Don't you want me too?”

Brennan pushes herself away from the counter and places a hand on his arm. “Of course, I want you.”

I love how those words mean a lot more than, yeah I want you to be my partner.

and

but he makes the mistake of taking a deep breath of her intoxicating scent. “God, you smell... exquisite.”

I don't quite see Booth verbalizing that last season but after the premiere I think it's a whole different ballgame and could totally see him saying this. They better move forward this season!

that was great loved it

Ooh! Nice. I love one shots like this, when they are something that could be in canon, just aren't. I liked this episode, for the most part, but it's not one i watch over and over. The one thing i DID like about it, is that Booth asked Brennan to 'trust' him, and she did, for the most part.

but i like your ending better, especially because the ending of the ep was of Cam. Which again, was totally fine, and fit the episode. but yeah. Booth and Brennan!