I really like the perspective you took in this one. Viewing a relationship from an outside perspective is always awesome, and you pulled it off very well. You really put us inside Karin's head in this, which is a hard thing to do, all the while maintaining the personality traits of the other characters. In short, I really, really liked it. It was hot stuff :)

There are very few times when I actually like Sasuke. You're one of the few authors that make me tolerate (and even kind of like him). I like the sweet&caring Sasuke, unfortunately that's only possible in a non-canon AU world. You pull it off quite nicely.

I don't like Karin much either, but reading this one-shot was enjoyable. It was funny and sad at the same time. You showed her humanity and usually authors that dislike a character just bash said character. *RESPECT* that is what a girl does need and the author yes sirree.

(fyi it flows if you sing it in the right tempo) :D

AHAHAHAHA!... poor karin, I loved the story, Sasuke and Sakura belong to each other :)

Serves Karin right! XD

It's a good story. I really like it except for..well...anything about Sakura annoys me, but that obviously doesn't matter.

you should make another chapter! but maybe make Karin a bit less bitchy. maybe depressed?

i like this...I really really do

I almost feel sorry for Karin, because how often are you going to be in Sakura's place? Most of the time, you're probably gonna be in Karin's place, watching the guy you like/love with someone else. *sigh*

I hate Karin, and I still did in the entire one-shot but I still somewhat...started...liking her? You can sympathize with her, and well, I'd be mad at you for making me feel this way, if it weren't for the fact I love this one-shot so much. xD (Yeah, run-on sentences RULE.)

I am sorta mad at Sasuke for defending Karin, but in all honestly, I guess Sasuke might care for Karin...somehow...maybe...somewhat...maybe...tiny maybe... (Yeah, I'm still in denial, haha...)

Ahh, I bask in the genius of your stories Neon. Trying to catch up on the 20 stories/updates in my inbox. I have to say I always look forward to yours, just 'cause they're that good. I love the "AND THEY STARTED MAKING OUT" parts at the end! xD Really make my day. I love this story! Hell, I love ALL you're stories! x3 I'm a Neon Genesis otaku now x3

Haha, Seriously, I love all of it, wouldn't change a word!

My Language Arts/English teacher got kinda mad at me when I was writing about Sakura and I pulled a "brightbrightbright" in italics, it was funny, then she let it slide. It seems to only work in your writing though... Which I still love! Okay, Im gushing again, anyway, AMAZING JOB AS ALWAYS!

Eternally Faithful Reader

-Ayake Rin

i think you got karin right. though i think sakura was a bit, i dunno... girlier? i dont know, cause when i read her, she sounded more 'like' and 'so?' and .. preppy.

err, nvm. 0_0

Cripes! I feel bad for the chick!

THIS MADE ME SMILE. And then laugh in a really creepy way, because I DO hate Karin and the latest chapters weren't really helping with that.

Thanks so much for brightening up my day. 3 (goes to catch up on the rest of your stuff.)

How very interesting...

Yes; I laughed too when you put in that little quip at the end. I really do think you portrayed Karin well, quite close to her character.

Not exactly, but still.

Kudos, kudos.

Nice to see someone finally realizes that Karin is a person. As a huge Karin fan (and a NaruKarin shipper, crack pairings FTW)it really annoys me when people don't realize that she's gone through at least as much, if not more, trauma in her life than Sasuke.

I 3 you.

That is all. XD

That was really good, and I love how you rationalized Karin's "bitchy persona" that is always popular in the FF world. Great job.