I like it.

One thing stuck out at me though, in the second to last paragraph, in the last sentence, it should say "should have" instead of "should of." Sorry, I'm not usually so nit-picky.

Excellent story! I enjoyed it!

hehe i like it.

cries and sniffles Loved it hun...keep it up! Lulu

Very sweet. :-) Would love to read more by you!

that is so sweet..i bet he really thinks like that too