-twitches her nose in interest-
this story loks like fun ^_^ I can't wait to read more, though I kinda snorted at the wings, I've read a few with him having wings and their always a blast ^_^

well looking forward to the next chapter, since I don't know what else to say...
~Mizu

Great chapter. ^-^

I liked the mako explaination. ^__^ Hope you update soon.

I think Minerva being Cloud's mother atually fits Cloud quite well

hmm. i wonder what will happen next. update soon :)

So this fic isn't too bad, it could be better, but a lot of things could, I guess :P. Anyway, I just wanted to let you know that Sephiroth's sword is definitely not six meters long- go measure that out. There's no way he could comfortably wield that, he'd look ridiculous. Sephiroth's sword in actuality can be no longer than two meters, which is his height more or less. Also, it might be an idea to give future chapters a quick read-over, i saw a few instances of words running together. Good job so far.

Enjoying this story. ^__^

interesting ^^ now i wanna read more :( update soon :)

Great chapter. ^-^

I like the relationship between Vincent and Cloud

i wonder what will happen next :) update soon :)

It's really great. ^-^

I have nothing constructive to tell you other than I really like this story and I hope that there will be more :-) Thanks for two really neat chapters and I can't wait to find out some of the characters history. :-)

I love your innovated ideas that this plot has show so far. Chapter two especially caught my interest. I enjoyed reading it in first person. It was really refreshing. However, not to be rude or anything, but the last couple paragraphs really confused me. I personally think you can (Showing the potential you did in chapter two) rewrite chapter one. It's a good chapter, but it could be better. And I'm sure you could pull it off.

I usually don't read to many point of view stories, but there are some I will read if there good enough. Amd this is one of the ones that I'll will stick with. Good chapter. I can't wait to read the next one. Later!