OMG are you really, really a princess? You don't write like one.

Oh, and real people have names like Jack and Mary. Prim? Hmph.

Very very short...but sad. Like you wrote it good. She has to look at the screen eventually...

You should definitely keep going, this is really good!

It's a good fanfic, however, I think Prim would be watching the screen. She is young, but she is also quite brave (or became braver when Katniss left for the Games).

It's a good scene though, in school with everyone else watching, and then her reactions, like she's removed from all of them. Well done :D

This is excellent. It's a brilliant view of how someone would feel while watching the Games and you made it perfect by adding Prim feeling guilty. I love how she talks about knowing and then adds that she hopes.
One thing: the skill and the gut to. Should be an s on the end of gut.
Keep on writing.
Geth342