 RedCloakedMaiden 2009-09-22 . chapter 1Very good! I loved how the mothers are all trying to one-up each other on the best child contest.
Although my script refers to a Matilda waking Moritz up in the morning, who I think would either refer to his mother or an unknown sister. |
 Demactica 2009-09-21 . chapter 1"Only good can come out of their relationship!"
PAH.
I love all the beautiful old German names.
This was really cute, and you showed the kids perfectly. I love how you could tell who each child was by the description of their eyes. |
 writerchic90 2009-09-21 . chapter 1Thank you for this. It made my crappy day better. I like it when they eavesdrop. |
 Chalcedony Rivers 2009-09-21 . chapter 1Wow. This was too hilarious! I loved how competative the mothers were of their children, and all of them eavesdropping...priceless!
Made my day. |