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Reviews for: Tea Party
RedCloakedMaiden
2009-09-22 . chapter 1
Very good! I loved how the mothers are all trying to one-up each other on the best child contest.

Although my script refers to a Matilda waking Moritz up in the morning, who I think would either refer to his mother or an unknown sister.
Demactica
2009-09-21 . chapter 1
"Only good can come out of their relationship!"
PAH.

I love all the beautiful old German names.

This was really cute, and you showed the kids perfectly. I love how you could tell who each child was by the description of their eyes.
writerchic90
2009-09-21 . chapter 1
Thank you for this. It made my crappy day better. I like it when they eavesdrop.
Chalcedony Rivers
2009-09-21 . chapter 1
Wow. This was too hilarious! I loved how competative the mothers were of their children, and all of them eavesdropping...priceless!
Made my day.
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