BEAUTIFUL I never read the book BUT YOU CAPTURED BOTH SUE"S AND Captured UE"s VARRIE"S PAIN WONDERFULLY! I think lots of Us can RELATE TO CARRIE"S PAIn

..this is exactly what I thought Sue would be thinking. *watched the movie for the first time yesterday and immediately began to ship Tommy/Carrie* XD

This was simply BEAUTIFULLY written. It's almost as if you can feel the pain that Sue is feeling. You painted the feeling of regret well, and every time she was reflecting on the events, that emotion was amplified even more. Well done, well done :). Now if only you had added more about Carrie's crazy religious mother...;)

Wow. That was amazing. I just finished reading the book and went on to see if there was any fanfiction for Carrie. I am so glad I did, because your story was great. It was very well written, and I didn't see any mistakes. I particularly like the description of Carrie passing the pencil to Sue. You got Carrie's personality down perfectly. Great job!