 amyblair 2009-12-09 . chapter 1I really liked your fic. Enjoyed the sweet banterings between Bogg and Jeff - pain in your assests and Braindrain.
Great job. |
 Margaret 2009-11-07 . chapter 1 "Brawny and Braindrain" LOL! You make em just like brothers! Love it!
And I really like how you let us know pretty soon what moment in History it is really soon. As soon as you wrote "he didn't lose his eye" I knew who you were talkin' about. Sometimes I feel like a "Jeffrey", because I like History and know about it and how sometimes I have to explain it to people. LOL.
But it was sad that had to happen to lil' Louis too. That's one of the difficult things about being a Voyager though. Right Ginger?! ;) |
 swanpride 2009-09-22 . chapter 1What a cruel thing they had to do...I am a little bit surprised that Jeffrey is able to rationalize this so easily. On the other hand, he had no problems to send Spartacus on the path of his own destruction. I think that Jeffrey is "bookwise" while Bogg is "streetwise". Together they are unbeatable!
Thanks! I especially love those small snippets about seemingly insignificant happenings which had a large impact on history in the long run. |
 DaynaWayna 2009-09-21 . chapter 1Aw! How cute. :) Braindrain and Brawny, HA! Ya know, Phineas COULD have been the model used for those paper towels... LOL!! Great job as always, and it was interesting to learn how Braille went blind. Poor baby! :( And I was impressed that Jeff could be strong enough to let it happen. That must have been tough. Good job boys. |
 Jake Crepeau 2009-09-21 . chapter 1What a unique approach, using the aftermath to tell the story! "Pain in my assets," that's classic! Though I'm not sure the expression "brain drain" was around in 1982; I don't remember hearing it back then. But what the heck, it works anyway. ;D |