 AngelOli16 2010-01-07 . chapter 22 Hi Flame, it's Grace again. I'm posting anonymously so I can sneak another review in. x3 I hope the next chapter is FULL of OBBY ROMANCE! Me and SweetyJen101 have the same idea. XD So please update soon!
SweetyJen101, if you're reading this, I totally agree with you on how the next chapter is going to end. XD Also, I am not discontinuing my story, so don't worry! I had BAD Writer's Block but Flame helped me out with it. I'm hoping to get my next chapter up tonight or tomorrow!
~Grace |
 springfling77177 2010-01-07 . chapter 22 are Otis and Abby going 2 have a baby? |
 autumn 2010-01-07 . chapter 22 ive been reading tis story and i love it so much! please update soon, PLEASE. |
 child who is cool 2010-01-04 . chapter 22nice chapter |
 SweetyJen101 2010-01-04 . chapter 22 OMG! You wonderful, wonderful, WONDERFUL GUY! Thank you from the bottom of my heart! And don't you worry about apoligizing! Don't beat yourself up, please! You are the sweetest thing on two legs!! Your updates are always A-MAZ-ING!! So you keep going strong and writing 'till you run out of brain!! But serirously though, I totally agree with AngleOli16! I am SO wondering if there is going to be some action! Like not evil action or funny action or even ACTION ACTION! But mabye some- *crovers mouth quickly with hand*-Oh I JUST CAN"T SAY IT! But I think you get my drift... *wink wink*... or DO YOU!?!?!?
P.s. SO sweet!! You saw your grama off!! Mabye it was better for you to do that then to update... Anny way you rock! |
 AngelOli16 2010-01-04 . chapter 22I LOVE OTIS! 8D HE'S SO SWEET! THAT AMAZING AND ROMANTIC HELICOPTER RIDE?? 8D THE ROMANTIC MOVIE? OTIS'S PAJAMAS?? OTIS AND ABBY SLEEPING WITH EACH OTHER AGAIN?! SQUUE EK!! 8D THAT WAS SO ADORABLE AND BEAUTIFUL, FLAME! *wipes tears* I LOVED IT! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! I wonder if Otis and Abby are gonna...WAIT A MINUTE, NEVERMIND! HEHE...I WASN'T GONNA SAY ANYTHING ELSE...HEHEH...=D I'M ON THE SAME PAGE AS SWEETYJEN101! XD
By the way, I'm sorry I haven't updated for forever. ;-; I'm really stuck in this writer's block and I have no idea how to make my next chapter seem accurate to the show. DX I'm still trying to decide what to do about this... |
 SweetyJen101 2010-01-02 . chapter 21 FLAME! WHY DO YOU PUT ME THROUGH SO MUCH AGONY ! I WAIT AND WAIT UNTIL NEW YEAR'S DAY AND WHAT DO I GET? ZIP, NADA, NOTHING!
No seriously though, why didn't you up date on new year's day? I sure you had a good reason so... PLEASE! Please update!
If you do, I'll give you imaginary hay to feed to Abby and Otis... no wait, what am I thinking, they don't want hay... how about an exotic cruise around the world!
Please Flame,their fait rests in your hands...
By the way you rock! |
 Nate Man1 2009-12-26 . chapter 21that was great. I hope that Otis does something very nice to Abby. |
 SweetyJen101 2009-12-24 . chapter 21 OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG! THAT WAS SO SWET OF ABBY TO GET OTIS' EYESIGHT BACK!
Back to reality: Man, college finals AND writers block that has to be tough!
Back to crazytown: What could Otis be planning for Abby?! PROBABLY SOMETHING OBBYLISHIS, and TOTALLY SHMEXY HOT! *Wink wink* WHAT? who me? no I'm not implying ANYTHING! *wink wink* I'm just saying... you did rate it T!! Not K, or M... just... T!
Back to reality: Don't mind that other voice, she's always been sick minded! Anyway good luck with the story!
This is SweetyJen101 saying: Peace out!
p.s. AngelOli16 is right, you BETTER update New Year's Day |
 child who is cool 2009-12-23 . chapter 21great chapter i really enjoyed it |
 AngelOli16 2009-12-23 . chapter 21Aww, sorry about the college finals and writer's block. I know exactly how frustrating that must've been. D8
Anyways...
YES! YES YES YES!! OTIE HAS HIS EYESIGHT BACK! HIP HIP HOORAY!! =D How sweet of Abby! Now...WHAT IS OTIS PLANNING TO DO FOR ABBY?! =O SOMETHING EXTREMELY OBBY SPICY HOTNESS?! =D OMG, CLIFFHANGER! I CAN'T HOLD ON MUCH LONGER, FLAME! You BETTER update New Year's!! 8D |
 SweetyJen101 2009-12-19 . chapter 20 DUDE you are killing me with the suspence! You need to write the next chapters to save the world, nay the UNIVERSE! I've been waiting around for the past WEEK for you to get the show on the road!! But take as much time as you want I'm just... Oh who am I kidding!! My life is endless torture without the stories that you, and AngelOli16 write! Please for all that is right, and just and true! CONTINUE! Peace out!! |
 SweetyJen101 2009-12-12 . chapter 20 Oh my God wow! awesome you have this all down so well, you pin pointed every charicter and made them sound so realistic. The beginning part was sweet! So that's why they thought Otis was dead! Poor Otie *Blowing nose in a tissue* Abby needs to find an eye docter quick! Keep up the writing though you should really publish this stuff! Can't wait for the next chapter! |
 child who is cool 2009-12-04 . chapter 20great chapter |
 Nate Man1 2009-12-04 . chapter 20That was a great chapter. It was so romantic of Otis and Abby to of spend a whole night in the same bed and how he is telling the story of how he survived. I hope he gets his eyesight back. Please update fast. |