i've been enjoying this read, so i look forward to the updated product ;)

Aww I love and miss this story- I just remembered reading this awhile ago and decided to look it up. And I still like it! Lol you're writing is still awesome!
-Kenzie

Sadness :(

I really liked this story. But I totally understand. It's hard to write when you just don't feel it anymore.

I'm glad you got the mojo back though :D I can't wait for the new edition of this story (even though, I thought it was pretty perfect as is)! Lol, may the force be with you too... always. (is a Star Wars Geek too). Speaking of which, Star Wars 3D!

awsome story are you going to write more on it? cus it was awsome ;D

This is a really good story can you please make another chapter.

This is turning out really good. Please update soon. I noticed you suddenly went into third person POV at one point, otherwise this story is building up really nicely.

Omg I love this story please please pleeeeeeeeeease continue.

You should have kairi's dad ask roxas come over for dinner and interigate him! Lol that's where roxas admits he likes someone else still someone that broke his heart. And kairi's listening from the ther room and she gets jealous but doesnt want to admit to him so she fights with him for a stupid reason. And he doesn't understand and they keep atguing until she slaps him while crying and says she hates the girl he loves! :)

good ideas, yes, no?

Ah! OmG I haven't read this story in a long time! Boy am I on the late freight!

Ok, I seriously love Roxas in this story, he's just so awesome! And Sora? Ugh... Sora, why are you such a manwhore! why? He is so doing naughty things w/ Namine, I can feel it!

But that would suck if it were true. Namine's her best friend in all. Aw, Kairi! I don't want you to get hurt! Lol

I'm sorry I haven't been reviewing your chapters DX I've been real busy w/ my stories...xD

Since I updated mine, that means you have to update yours! I DEMAND AN UPDATE!

Awesome story. XD The plot's getting better and better. w Please update soon. ;3

You're doing really well at keeping to the games, like, the events and whatnot. great job. :D

I really, erally wanna know what happened to Roxas 8 years ago. You should tell us. :P

Keep writing,

Ally

YES! They're so GOOD together! You're doing a great job of making sure they both stay in character, and like, they're great together! Love this story, keep writing!

Ally

:) I think Hayner and Olette would be really cute together. And Roxas could be with Kairi, and Pence... could go be a loner. xD

Ally

Awww. Roxas is such a sweetie! :3 I'm a major Roxiri fan, haha, so props to you. :D

Ally

Awww, this is just like the game! Great job, keeping everyone in character and whatnot. :D

Ally

Ahaha, good start; I really wanna read more now. :D

Ally