really interesting fic

intersting fic sounds like another good fic in the making.

truely good story. looking forwards to see if there come any updates. might be a bit late to respond, but still, some feedback is good

I like this

Despite the fact that I know almost nothing of the Warcraft universe, this is actually a rather interesting story. However, I do suggest that you do a bit more proofreading, since there were numerous typos (skipping a letter, or hitting the wrong key, for instance). I look forward to future installments, and implore you to continue your Naruto stories.

Not bad, one of hte more decent WoW fics I have seen. I will follow this story then.

several mistakes but a good story

Is Darwin, by chance, a representation of Your in-game character? :) By the way: skilled rogues own. We once crippled another clans tankers with us rogues quickly taking out the healers. God lol'd.

Good fight,

Seiichi, Shizha.

There is a serious error in this story(but besides that, it rocks!)

Your targets are around 27 years old and they committed their crimes when they were 8 years old. Can you really hold them to those? They could have believed he died, it's not that realistic that they would want an 8 year old as a slave.

What if they don't even REMEMBER the kid, this was about 17 years ago, right?

The problem with this, is that if your character is making a hit-list then it won't be as morally acceptable as, say, the Count of Monte Cristo where one accepted a bribe that put him in prison for life, another stole his wife, and another did the bribing and manipulating to steal his job.

This is going to be a bloody massacre of people who just made mistakes as stupid kids.

This is my first WoW fic and I like it, can you recommend any more?

Most interesting. Let us see what the future has in store, yes?

Its not your usual story but it looks interesting. If you write more I would enjoy it.

cool story, I really like the plot. the writing is well done.