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| Luke Skywaxer 2008-07-05 ch 1, | abuseShoot, I thought something good was gonna happen! I like what sabrina tells kris about shock. wonder if that's really all that feeling is. if only someone would have told ME that when i first was feeling it. |
| Stormchilde 2006-01-10 ch 1, | abuse"It never becomes a casual thing and it shouldn't." Excellent emotion. I'm glad you wrote a sequel to this one! |
| Claripup 2004-05-22 ch 1, | abuseLoved it... |
| DragonPeaceEnvoy 2004-03-24 ch 1, | abuseShe's right. "It never becomes a casual thing and it shouldn't." This is a pretty good ficlet, short and sweet, and to the point. Remind me to try that style of writing. Now, I need to get back to my homework. Sincerely, Loretta (dragoncon@ToughGuy.net) |
| princess of all thangs mele... 2004-01-09 ch 1, | abusei did goog on mine and u did good on yours |
| AP Especially 2002-12-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseShort and sweet. |
| Amanda 2002-08-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat story! Is there any chance for a sequal? |
| Amanda 2002-08-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat story! Is there any chance for a sequal? |
| Joe R 2002-03-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseIs there more to this story? It ends with Sabrinia going off to search for Kelly and Bosley, but no link to a chapter 2? What gives? |