that was very crafty and well written! AWESOME JOB. you're an amazing writer and the story was very moving. it's just soo saad. ;(

That was sooooo good, I feel sorry for Temari and Shikamaru. I'm trying to to spoil it for the people who read the reveiws first (like me).. I need.. no I can't say it.. but.. need. can't.. ahhhhhh. BUT, I CAN'T WAIT FOR PART TWO!Temari should go to the Leaf.

Good luck and keep it up.

Loved By Another

Keep shika alive!

Oh my gosh...this is so sad. I like it, I mean I'm not liking the pain and stuff, but I like how you wrote it and was able to bring real emotions into it. It made me almost tear up at the end.

Very, very interesting. I can't wait for teh next one. I can't think of anything to critic about.

Wow. That was deep. You should add a twist, like she swore never to fall in love again and she falls for another guy, or that Shikamaru turns out to be still alive, the body they found in the village was fake.

Still, that was awesome!

It's really good, and very sad - I almost cried. Looking forward to reading more

really good and will there be more soon? plus when i saw the title and the pairing i just knew there was death but it was really good :):)

Temari was very IC.

beautifully written and God, I hope he's still alive? pretty please! lol

cant wait to read more so update soon !:D

SP7

why do you guys alway killed them before! This can't happen!