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PawprintsR
2009-12-09 . chapter 6
This story is AMAZING!
:)
Keep posting!
Fire Dolphin
2009-12-01 . chapter 6
hmm, interesting. i wonder what is going to be happening next. i also wonder if this attitude that helga has will make arnold have feelings for helga. update
kpfan72491
2009-11-22 . chapter 6
Omg Great chapter :D
Hellerick Ferlibay
2009-11-19 . chapter 6
Diana sure chose the right place to regain inspiration :) She takes the life in the Sunset Arms. I'm really curious about this character.

Great chapter.
acosta perez jose ramiro
2009-11-15 . chapter 6
Good chapter, and yeah, Helga really wants to forget about her love for Arnold... in her case, that's as hard as no longer breathing.

Keep the good writing.
Shahrezad1
2009-11-08 . chapter 5
Ah. The age-old dillema of 'she likes me, but I don't like her.' -nods- Well, hopefully Grandpa is right and things will somehow settle into some sort of order for Arnold, whether it be romantic or no.

I like the creation of your first tenant. She seems nice, but also plausible for the Hey Arnold universe, as well as your story. It will be interesting to see what kind of effect she has on the other boards, as well as perhaps Helga (being automatically another female mother or sister-figure if you wish, but perhaps a friend that also understands what it's like to be inspired to write). Either way, I can't wait to see what you do with her. =^__^=

"His grandmother was wiping tomato juice off of a knife beside the sink until she finally set it down and smiled. The sight disturbed her grandson but he ignored it..."

Okay, that makes me wonder what REALLY happened. XD
acosta perez jose ramiro
2009-11-08 . chapter 5
Very good chapter.

Keep the good writing.
kpfan72491
2009-11-08 . chapter 5
great chapter
CatOfTha'Dune88
2009-11-07 . chapter 5
Simply lovely, I cant wait for more. Very in character.
rejectsuperstar
2009-11-04 . chapter 3
*squeal!* I really like how this is written! Nice cliffhanger...Very realistic with the keeping in touch and keeping someone in their mind's back burner... it happened to me when I moved, as well. Great story!
Shahrezad1
2009-10-20 . chapter 4
-laughs wickedly- Oh, now THAT is what I call an ending. Geeze, your comedic timing keeps on improving. Especially as I was wondering what he was smiling about... XD

I think the idea of including boarders is a good idea. Although you might want to take into account the fact that his grandparents are much older now, and try a scenario in which he has to interview the new people (in an 'adult responsibility' type situation). I would love to see something like that. And it might give you the chance to create some really fun characters, based on their first impressions as seen through Arnold's eyes.

Also, the potential awkwardness of having boarders that are already existing characters in the series might be interesting too, in that the reader will get to see a whole other side of their personalities.
kpfan72491
2009-10-16 . chapter 4
amazing chap, update soon
acosta perez jose ramiro
2009-10-16 . chapter 4
Heh, even Arnold isn't dense enough to not notice she still loves him.

Keep the good writing.
Shahrezad1
2009-10-13 . chapter 3
-cackles evilly- Oh, what a wicked, wicked place to leave it at. Especially with Helga in such an emotional upheaval. And somehow I knew that as soon as she decided not to head home that she would turn instead to the boardinghouse. Jeeze, Louise, this is going to be an awesome interaction for the next chapter.

XD XD XD
Hellerick Ferlibay
2009-10-13 . chapter 3
Heh, everyone saw it coming, but still, it was a great twist! :)

Well, Helga can tell Arnold that she suspected that there were some burglars in the house and she decided to check it, and Arnold can tell grandparents that he asked Helga for help, so I guess there is no big trouble here.

Update soon!
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