HA HA squishy! LOL I love this drabble I think it's my favorite so far! LOL so cute!

WOW you are such a good writer amazing! :)

hehehe i loved thiis one particularly, so cute!

GOOSEBUMPS!

I enjoyed this - very interesting to see into Alice's mind before she became a vampire. I've actually started writing an Alice/Jasper two/three shot myself, which starts from the moment when Alice wakes up from being turned - she's such an interesting character to explore. I like your response to the prompt and I especially like the bit about wanting to write on the wall "I do not taste the blood of children in my dreams and like it" - because I suppose it would make sense that Alice would see that she was going to become a vampire but would be horribly confused by it. Good job;)

"She is his salvation and his last ounce of strength.

Alice is Jasper’s one-foot-in-front-of-the-other, and he would follow her, he will follow her, anywhere, always."

I loved these lines, how very lovely Sophy, you really capture how much she means to him. His redemption and his salvation. Well done :)

Poor Charlie! LOL. Thats so not true! He is an awesome dad I wish he was my dad anything is better than my dad!As for the Renee thing that was so not his fault and it makes me sad to think that he feels that way! LOL i'm getting emotional over fictional characters! :)

Poor Charlie:-( No one ever thinks about him (Bella least of all). Poor guy. This was good (as usual!) - funny and yet heartbreaking at the same time.

Ok, so I have an unreasonable hatred for Alice and Jasper as a couple, and Alice in general, but even with that- This is adorable. Maybe because it's such a small dose, it snuck around my walls, but really? So cute. And exceedingly well done. I'm loving these little spoonfulls of story.

lol, cute!

Young Jacob begging his mother not to die is heartbreaking. Not-so-young Jacob willing Bella to stay is also sad. Poor guy.

I loved this. :)

Aw Jasper -sigh- I aready love him and you go and write this I'm the one who's gonna end up worshiping him. LOL so true so awesome can't wait for more!:)

Seriously, I don't know how you come up with all your ideas - this was brilliant as always and very sweet:) Jasper is a very interesting character without a doubt.

AW poor jake stupid Bella Jake is a way better choice than Edward! :( Oh well I still like the series anyways no point in bein mad. Can't wait for more! :)

Wow, girl. I never really review on this site much anymore, but I just couldn't not tell you how great this was. The parallels flow so seamlessly, and it makes me hurt massively in all the appropriate places (Heart? Check. Guts? Check.) As someone who also believes that Sarah had an integral role in making Jake as wonderful / tragic as he was, I approve of this little story one hundred percent. I especially love the line,

"It’s not like a few extra e’s had done much good the first time around, anyway."

It's so painful for me to think of Jacob as this hopeful little guy who just keeps on trying, even though nothing in the past suggests that things are finally (eventually) going to go his way. But still, he just... keeps on trying. So damned sad! I want to give him a hug or something. Perfectly depicted, girl! I adore your ability to be succinct and expressive at the same time. *Is jealous* :P