Lol, this story sounds pretty good. One thing to maybe attract more attention would be to:

- not put that you're bad at titles in the title. It makes you seem under- confident and it also ruins the title. Leela's Adventures is fine.

- instead of just one paragraph a chapter, you could connect all of them into just one. Makes it a lot easier to read.

- In the first chapter, you need to maybe describe the settings, space it out a bit. it brings suspense and better reading.

With the tips outta the way, I just want to say how awesome it does actually sounds!

Well done!

x

Little-Miss-Umbreon

...-cries- Why, 0h, why did you have to use Angelica as the frontier brain's name? That's my name and it's the worst name my parents could think of! Oh well, apart from that awesome chapter, kay!

SORRY, I'M SO SORRY I DIDN'T REVIEW A MONTH AGO

I'M SO SORRY

Awesome chapter btw

Yeah!Leela's back!It's amazing how I'm almost the only one to freaking review this awesome story. That's IT!I gonna tell everyone that if they don't review this story then Lucario will Focus Blast them into oblivion...then Giratina,Dialgs & Palkia can eat them or something...

Hahahaha lol! I need to finish this soon... love it.

-Hezz

That was so funny!I don't know why only me has reviewed this awesome story!It's so...awesome!

WOW!Awesoem!