Mort seems to be blind but knowing all the sametime i think part of him knows Ellie is jealous of Isabel and part of him does'nt. hard to tell...for me. I like the proud side of Eleanor, it fits her. I wonder what will happen when Isabel comes in the morning? thank you for updateing. great job!
Jess

Lovely chap hun! Hmm I just know That she is a little jealous and yes she is being proud but he, she has no choiche to stay with him, and that's his fault, but on the other hand he does really love her... write on soon!

With love,

Tessa.

Lovely! Wonderful writing as always! I wonder how Ellie's going to react when Isabelle arrives. And what Isabelle will say when she sees that Ellie was hurt. It appears that Mort found himself between two women, I wonder what he thinks if he discovers of Ellie's jealousy (or maybe he already knows). Update soon!

wow so ellie had fell while mort was gone, poor thing the
bruises on her sounded awful. i know mort will take very
good care of her. so isabelle the wicked witch is going
to come over the next day if she smarts off i hope ellie slaps
her for me. you can tell mort enjoys ellie being jealous.
but ellie to proud to admit it, but i hope she'll fight
to walk again and fight for her man, tell the witch to find
another man and leave ellie but i believe in time ellioe will
show her a thing or to shes got to. but we know mort loves
ellie. i hope you are doing ok. me i'm doing pretty well
trying to keep from getting sick the weather here is very
cold, thank you for asking. youre the best.

i'm glad ellie is out of the hospital, i hope she walk again,
mort didn't want to leave her, most of us girls wished we
had a guy like mort ,loving and caring ,hot looking guy.
she needs to watch out for witch isabelle she'll be sinking
her claws into mort, thats going to make ellie feel bad, but
it might give her the strength she needs to get up and walk
and fight for her man, and tell him she loves that isabelle
witch wont know what hit her. if another guy showed imterest
in ellie that might give her more comvdents in herself i guess
we will wait and find out can't wait please update as soon
as posiable, thanks for asking how i'm doing, i'm ok i hope
your doing good to. your storys help me forget my troubles
thank you for that, you and emmajules is my favorite authors.
you guys are great keep up the good work.

meh... the only thing I can think of is maybe he's there for longer than an hour or someone breaks in the house -_- *is clueless* *shrugs*

oe love is in the air... I love this story, and the fact ellie just has to count on him... write on soon!


with love,

Tessa

This chapter is just...oh I can not think of an adjective that can describe it honestly. It is so touching. Just a brush of a fingertip on the lip can just leave such longing, and you described it just so wonderfully. I love that feeling...sorry got lost in thought ;). I am so excited with this new chapter, however I am prepared for another sharp curve that you might throw in!

this was a sweet chapter but sad, poor ellie please don't
let her be able to walk real soon, mort is so sweet and
good to her, all us girls wishes we had a man like mort
to love and really care for you, but i hope mort do'nt
give up on ellie, and he starts taking interest in that
witch isabelle, because if he does maybe ellie will get up
and start walking and tell mort she loves him to get him, back you know he would leave isabelle real quick for ellie,
great chapter.

Aw, so sweet! Loved it. Especially the "she felt bad for almost forcing him to say something that she can’t say back…yet" part. Another great chapter! Update soon!

Ooh, Ellie is jealously. Can you send me a link of what she looks like on your profile?

awesome job!

HOW did I miss chapter 12?? I was a bit lost so I checked out ch. 12 and was even more lost till I re-read chapter 11 -_- *sighs* Alright. I'm updated and up on track now though ^_^... I should work on 'Mechanical Fates'... get at least another page done... >_> *sighs again* I hate writer's block but I'm just a little stuck *stares at ceiling pathetically* Anywho, I still hate his publisher... *violent thoughts running across mind*... *is being heavily restrained* .. >_<

poor ellie i do hope she can walk again, now she has that
little witch (isabelle) to worry about, i wonder what morts
going to thonk when she tells him about the picture, ellie
can't give up hope i don't believe that mort would leave her
for that witch but i can see how she would feel the way she
does , but she needs to fight to get better so she can kick
that witch all over tashmore lake. i'd just love to see that
happen. can't wait to see what happens next. i hope you
have a happy thanksgiving.

Great chapter! So Ellie realized that she likes him. I wonder what's going to happen when he gets back now that she's seen the photo on the magazine. Update soon!