Fantastic job with Pete's POV. I loved that you made him pensive and worried, where so often we get a lot of overly confident, jokester versions of Pete. Your Pete seemed so believable and far more interesting. I hope you continue writing for this show.

aw good idea for a fic!

It was a very nice character study, but I think it might have been more effective with dialogue, even minimal. Nevertheless, it rocked. =]

good job
I wuved it! very good job expressing Pete's thoughts
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