I have really enjoyed this story. In fact, I could actually see this occurring as if I were watching a real episode.

Congrats on giving Dagwood a chapter with a point of view all his own, an your characterization was beautiful. He is one of my favorite seaquest characters, but terribly overlooked IMHO!

I would hope that you might co

ntinue this story someday.

Very depressing but I like it! I have always loved the drama! Keep it up! This is very well written! Good job!

Short, but holding meaning. It's not often one reads a fic from the p.o.v of Dagwood. Good job.

Ok. This is really. good. Lucas protecting Dagwood. Dagwood comforting Lucas. This fits well. I can see this happening in the lost time offscreen between seasons two and three. Excellent job here. Very effective use of POV changes.

Thanks for sharing

Reba

Very beautiful words put together. A lot of feeling and understanding in this short piece. Well done. More please !

JULES