Great short story :)
You just made my night because i wanted to read someting short just before going to sleep.
I love sugary sweet stuff :D
keep writing!

Kitty

SUGARY FLUFF FTW.
This made me grin like a maniac. Thank you.

Don't feel bad, sugary fluff makes my world go round! This was so adorable, I absolutly loved every momemt! Nice job!

~Luckystar ^_^

this was great, i enjoyed it a lot. i like the whole 'fireworks' theme, that was really cool.

great job! :D

Sugary fluff is good too! It was very cute. I liked it :)

Aw! I've always wanted to share a good fireworks show with my future t'hy'la cause it really is romantic and erotic! You showed that very feeling well with Kirk and Spock's interaction. Keep up the good work!

lol angst turned sugary lol great i loved it awasome job

This wasreally cute; a nice treat. Thanks for sharing!