I'm pretty late finding this, but I really enjoyed this story. It's such an original way of writing Kratos' character, and your style is beautiful.

I particularly love the end, when Kratos says "I do think I love you..." Like he's not quite sure what it means.

kinda a sad fic, but good

So very well written! ;.; Cougar likes very much! So heart-warming and yet heart-tearing! Cougar liked it so much she showed it to VenVen and we both had broken hearts after reading its wonderfulness. <3

When Lloyd said "Kratos...I forgive you," my heart broke. ;.; I lost it. So keep up the good work <3

Wow... That was...wow.

It started off very dark, depressing, and by God I wanted to bitch-smack Kratos' face off for being such a selfish self-absorbed prick. I do like how it gardually shifted to Kratos' realization of what he had done and what he realized, and it's very...complete, how you ended it.

Still...dark things like this make me feel...heavy. It really makes me feel bad...Heh, guess this kind of thing isn't for optimists. (Facepalm)

Very nice, though depressing