Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.

Your writing is absolutely amazing!

This was really sheer brilliance - to show the humanity that Mana and the 14th had when it came to Allen.

I love your work! :D

I love your writing style I could believe that this could have possible happened.

kinda depressing story but I liked it. and the extras at the end of some of the chapters were hilarious.

D: I just had a flashback! Oh no...poor Mana...D:

Haha "You're weird." I love Allen.

The last chapter was so sad T_T

oh that ending was so sad but it fit really well. i really enjoyed reading this fic and i look forward to more of your work.

for some reason i really like the fact that mana chose allen over his brother. i really hope that there's something that can be done for the little boy.

mana's beginning to feel guilty. i feel bad for him but at least he was there for allen. great job with this chappy.

aw, allen was so nice to mana in this chapter. the man did wonders for that boy.

Aw... Sad ending. But I liked it. Because most stories end have happy endings. This was new... Poor Allen! How ironic, though... Loved the whole story!

Oh! He's going to reverse the spell... I wonder if he'll succeed?

IS there a way to save him? :( Aww... Poor Allen. Annd... I'm sorry I only reviewed now! School's been bugging me. I am failing in Algebra. You know how Algebra could get.

Such a short ending, but a good one, trust me. It was so ironic, but not all stories end well. It seemed an appropriate ending, even if it was so sad. I think it was slightly rushed, maybe could have made it a little longer (the chapter, I mean), but it was how it ended in reality (if manga/anime can be called reality XD), so I think it was great. I can't wait to see your other stories continued, and I'm sorry for such a late review.

Keep doing what ya love!

-PeanutAngel