 MirrorMyThoughts 8/1/10 . chapter 2.. pooey, just went back to re-read them incase you took them down, and poof.. :( u already have.. sniff's...
in that case, i guess ignore my earlier review :L sorry bout that |
 MirrorMyThoughts 8/1/10 . chapter 1! KEEP THEM! PLEASE OH PLEASE Oh PLEAAAAASEEE! .. eh.. Sorry .. i just read ur profile bit, please don't take them down, there truly enjoyable to read, and honestly, the writings NOT bad, please trust me when i say your most definably not the worst writer that post's stories one here, actually, ur probs in the top twenty percent at least.
I'm all for you staring again, :) its enjoyable to read stories when people have gone back and re-written their work. but please, pretty please with a hundred cherrys on top, don't delete what you already have. there too good for that :) |
 tennisgal456 3/17/10 . chapter 10haha haha im here! dun dun da dun
im glad you updated and im sorry for being such a total slacker
not much brain for sharing in there bb
well some of the people just want to get pictures to show their friends or it is like those who stand outside filming a tornado while it heads straight for them, and then when they realize it is heading their way and try to run, its too late
i wanna know what happened! lol
three month power suspension? so they took them away or she just isnt allowed to help the team fight off monsters and evil villians?
i think star is definitely needed and she wont be happy to hear that b
lol my bet is that he will wait till the morning of to start the project and then barely manage to turn it in
gar is just so good at the technical jargon of explaining powers, hehe
and not to mention that kori knows how to fly the thing from her home planet
so the girls just left before the meeting and the debriefing from the headmaster? he wont be too happy about that im sure
so gar and raven cant come to ski?
lol matching sweaters for everyone!
love it as usual! cant wait for more adn happy 2010!
keep it up |
 RobinxStarfire4ever 1/8/10 . chapter 10Hey, this was a really cool chapter! I can't really write a very long review right now, cause my mom is blabbing her big fat mouth off about sometihng to my sister, and I'm afraid if I don't get up there soon, someone (probably me) will end up with a broken leg courtsy of my soon to be very pissed off sister. Anyway, I LOVE this story and I cant wait till you update again! Bye! ILY!
RobinxStarfire4ever aka Catherine |
 Somewhere In Time 1/6/10 . chapter 10Random sweater indeed. This was a mite chaotic, but I guess that's how Gar's mind is! :) |
 BGuate224 12/31/09 . chapter 10thanks soo much for posting this chapter. hpe you update soon. Just out of curiosity isn't it Robin who has the mental bond with Raven? Oh well. Update soon!
-BGuate224 |
 BGuate224 12/30/09 . chapter 9nice storry so far. really hope you update soon so i can fall in love with your story cause honey please i'm getting there. i was laughing so hard! felt really sad at some parts. other parts i was just smiling. and i don't smile for nothing.
*PLEASE UPDATE SOON :D*
-BGuate224 |
 tennisgal456 12/1/09 . chapter 9so why does he love being a cyborg there if he is bored? couldnt he have clept out of that class if he already had the knowledge?
haha give em three guesses and the first two dont count huh? nice
nice hologram then, did dick approve? or did he not even know? so many questions
ugh all those boys seem to do is watch sports and make bets
if there was such a thing as vegetarian popcorn,im sure gar would have discovered it by now
down time is always nice
keep it up |
 tennisgal456 12/1/09 . chapter 8I know i know i am so late here, but im trying
kory snap out of it, dick kiss her or tell her you love her or at the very least kidnap her and take her back home for goodness sake
i guess kory didnt react fast enough because she was caught off guard?
lol at least he is alive and kory seems to be back
so she is queen now, but will she relinquish her power to go back with the team?
lol if all it takes to get dick to crack his neck is say korys name, then he is set for life
YAY SHE IS COMING BACK! thats awesome
yep called that one! and she can still fly back periodically if need be to help out
well the muse gets what the muse wants! _
keep it up |
 catgirl Serenity 11/23/09 . chapter 1I just got done reading this story and it is wonderful. It is usually very hard to write from a present-tense firt-person point of view-verb tense is what usually slip people up-but you managed very well. You reflected each character's personality wonderfully in their narration. Especially Dick and Starfire's POV (albeit that was most of the story). I'd like to see mroe form teh other character's points of view as well. I cannot wait to see how the story progresses. Good luck and keep up the good work. |
 Somewhere In Time 11/22/09 . chapter 9Ooh, downtime. And Harper just played high-tech hooky and made Vic look bad instead. Poor Vic. xD
Is this "Headmaster" supposed to be a bad person? I agree with Dick, things are probably more complicated than it seems on the surface.
Didn't the kids get in trouble for shooting off the Earth into outer space without any notice? Just wondering. |
 timkhj 11/2/09 . chapter 8GREAT ARC! loved the entire plot and theme of it. Love the retelling of the characters, although you kept them wonderfully "in character" given the updated setting. I really felt like i was reading what could be a great comic revival of the story.
great job! |
 Good Graces 11/1/09 . chapter 8Yay, that was pretty good! I liked it. Please keep up the good work, and...yeah, just keep up the awesome work. Update soon!
Sincerely,
Good Graces |
 Good Graces 11/1/09 . chapter 2Okay...how did I not know about your story! Maybe it's because I've been reading Smallville fanfiction lately instead of Teen Titans, but I love your story. You are so good at your descriptions. I like that your story actually has a plot and is going places. It's not just mindless fluff...not that I mind that, but you know what I mean.
Great job! You have made me want to come back over to Teen Titans. Keep up the good work!
Sincerely,
Good Graces |
 Somewhere In Time 10/30/09 . chapter 8I loved this arc, and how it ended. It did seem strange that Star would be just normal after a big fight that most certainly went on in the library.
Good thinking Grayson, kiss her before she knows what's happened...XD |