Oh, wow! Write more soon ok? :3

Awesome. Don't know what else to say really.

how can i put this ending on the second chapter...adorable!
i liked it!
i can see with a lot of clarity how human John really is! my fave!
idk why..but i want to mouth out that he came out how he really is...a child...idk why..maybe b/c he can't talk well about he's true feelings :)
10/10!

This was absolutely wonderful. I'm very excited to read something from Cortana's POV.

This only worked with John's perspective, because it wasn't overly emotional. Or smitten or anything, just slight implications. Great job.

Not bad. Not bad at all.

Very nice

This is definitely a "we can haz moar?" moment.