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wjobsessed
2009-09-23 . chapter 1
Ow! That's dark and sad.
Well-written though.
My favs:
"Nina freakin' Sharp." LMAO! I like that.
"criminal-history-stacked-to-the-sky Peter" Like that too.
Well it was fun reading, but I hope she doesn't go nuts like that after the Charlie debacle.
Ocein
2009-09-23 . chapter 1
Why do u do this to us??!! hehehe...nice tension. I can actually see her snapping and pulling a gun out on Peter. Let's hope it would then turn into some steamy action ;)
Lolita Tides
2009-09-23 . chapter 1
My favourite part of the story?: "I’m just in it for the reviews"

lol no but seriously, I really liked this drabble. It brings up so many questions like "Did shapeshifter !Charlie kiss her because he wanted to, or because he sensed the real!Charlie wanted to or was he just trying to throw her off guard?" and "Will she ever put the gun to Peter's head again? What about Astrid? Broyles? Walter?" and lastly "Now that Peter knows Olivia is offlimits, what happens between them? Friends? Enemies? Nothing?"

So many questions from only a few words!

-Lo
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